I loved this too! I can't wait for the other chapters to come! Report Review
I simply love this! It is so goood!!! :D Report Review
Interesting plot, I'd like to read more! :) Report Review
I really enjoy your story but you need to re-edit it because i did notice some mistakes. All in all though I really enjoyed the story and think that it is very creative and well written(: Report Review
Good chapter! Interesting story so far so I hope you can update soon! Report Review
it is so good! I LOVE IT!!! Report Review
LOVE LOVE LOVE♥ Report Review
This is quite an interesting concept, and I'm sure the rest of the story will be great too! But there's one thing that keeps nagging me: Draco is the EXACT male version of canon-Hermione and Hermione seems to be the EXACT female version of canon-Draco. Remember, it's your story, so feel free to change up the personalities a bit. By the idea of the story, you are a very creative person; use that magic creativity dust on your characters! Can't wait for the next update! Report Review
Well, now that the tables have turned, it will be very interesting to se how this all plays out!
I like the way that you also included Ginny Weasly in this story as Ron's twin sister. Nice way to add her in there.
The details, in the dialoug during the train ride, are superb! I see that Draco is very interested in the books, much like our Hermione. Good idea with the whole role reversal techinque.
Though, I noticed that there are some typos, so you might want to look over your story, or type it in a Word Document first, so that it automatically fixes all mistakes. :)
Overall a good first chapter, and good luck!
~TheAmazeringGinger Report Review
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