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Review #1, by melian Winter Wonderland

14th March 2013:
I assume that the Twilight references were intended? Calling him Edward, giving him that description, and then having him a vampire as well - well, that was the icing on the cake. Aside from that, I thought it was a nice start to the story. Having the American school in Salem was a great idea, and the hint of travel to the HP universe (grandmother in London) is nicely done. I can see that the US wizarding world doesn't use quite as old-fashioned given names as the British one does, but that actually adds to the setting: leaving the new world behind as you journey to the old one. Nicely done!

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Review #2, by sirius4eva Winter Wonderland

3rd December 2012:
Interesting beginning. How long will the story be?

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