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Review #1, by We Are Padfoot and Prongs Finder's Keepers

27th April 2013:
Oh my Merlin, the robes lady! XD She was just... Yeah, wow, she was something.
Lyra was for me, wasn't it? I am just about the only one who will get that reference, but thanks anyway. :D
Ron- SIMMER DOWN. IT WILL BE OK.
Draco- Well. You're awkward.
Rose- NO, DON'T HATE SCORPIUS, HE IS TOTALLY YOUR SOUL MATE!!! (Although it does make for some lovely sexual tension later.)
Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Seeing your name pop up in my reviews is fantastic, just throwing that out there. xD
Isn't she something? haha I was dying while writing that part, she's fantastic and so eccentric I love her. I love the name. And I had to throw some kind of star name in there somewhere, Draco's still sticking to tradition. ;) Yup! Your summaries pretty much sum that chapter up nicely. ;P Thanks for the amazing review, as usual. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #2, by Magic_Hogwarts Finder's Keepers

21st April 2013:
Good chapter :)

Thanks for updatting

keep on writting

and real good story so fare :)

Author's Response: Well thank you! :D I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story so far, it means a lot. I shall most definitely keep writing and the next chapter should be up fairly soon. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #3, by {Faux the Phoneix} Finder's Keepers

21st April 2013:
I'm really enjoying your story!!! Please write more. I think you're a very good author. I liked how you included pictures at the beginnings of the first few chapters. Can you please continue to do so?

I will continue to read your book as soon as the next chapter comes out. Thanks very much for writing this story!

Author's Response: Well thank you!! :D I'm so glad that you're enjoying it so far, that means a lot to me. I'm planning on including some more chapter images, so keep your eyes peeled. :) I hope to see you around some more as the next chapters come out. Thank you for leaving a review, it means a lot!
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #4, by AriesGirl40 Finder's Keepers

21st April 2013:
Loved the new chapter. The words just flowed. I'm beginning to feel bad for Scorpius already. Stinks to have a younger sister. She is forever the baby, which means the one who gets the most worry. Turns an older sibling self sufficient really quick, and resentful. A year without parents or his sister might be good for him too. Don't have the hassles staring you in the face every day. So, do I see a scrapping Draco and Ron in the future? I'm happy that Hermione knows the value of forgive and forget'
See you next chapter!

Author's Response: Well thank you! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! Ahh Scorp. Love the little booger, I totally understand the whole little sibling thing and it's so beyond frustrating. Mm there may be a scrapping between Draco and Ron to come, who knows? ;p That's why I love our little Hermione. She was always one of the most forgiving in my mind, and one who would really take everything into account to determine what the best thing is. Thanks for the lovely review, it means a lot! :) I hope you continue to keep reading and enjoying. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #5, by Bailey Finder's Keepers

21st April 2013:
I'm loving this story! I absolutely adore Rose and Albus' relationship. They're so cute! I'm super excited to see how you will paint Scorpius' character.

Author's Response: Well shucks! :P I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! I absolutely love writing this story, I love Rose and I love her attitude. I'm really excited for them to get to school so all chaos can ensue. :p Thank you for the lovely review, it means a lot. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #6, by Magic_Hogwarts Supplies

10th February 2013:
Good chapter

thanks for updatting

keep on writting :)

Author's Response: Why thank you! You're too kind. :P
I shall update shortly, and I shall keep on writing, of course! :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #7, by Kristen Messer Supplies

9th February 2013:
PLEASE KEEP GOING! I LOVE THIS STORY! Once i realized there wasn't a seventh chapter i got all sad! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! for a desperate anime/harrypotter fangirl!! *falls off of bed and spazzes out on the floor* heeellpp me

Author's Response: Aww this is one of the greatest reviews for this story thus far. Thank you so much!! I have the seventh chapter written and looked over and as soon as Fairytaled is updated, this one will be updated ASAP!! :D Thank you for the amazing review, it means a lot!
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #8, by We Are Padfoot and Prongs Supplies

8th February 2013:
dun Dun DUN!!! A wild Scorpius appears! I can't wait to see what happens! Cause I'm betting it's going to be dramatic and I love drama. I'm trying to decide whether they're going to be immediate enemies, extremely awkward, or in love at first sight.

Author's Response: Haha why yes he does! I love that little bugger. He's absolutely amazing!! Pshh, there's always drama where Scorp and Rose are concerned. :P Welll I guess we'll see, won't we?! :D
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #9, by Magic_Hogwarts Surprises

6th December 2012:
good chapter
thanks for updatting
keep on writting :)

Author's Response: Well thank you! :D You're quite welcome, though I must say it's my pleasure! I shall keep writing, don't you worry! The next one shall be up fairly soon! :D Thanks for leaving a lovely review.
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #10, by We Are Padfoot and Prongs Surprises

1st December 2012:
Aw, I loved it! I love how sweet Al is to her, it's awesome that they can be best friends. And the best part is, Rose's birthday would pretty much have been perfect for me! XD she was always the one I felt most similar to in all fan fictions. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you did! :D I wish I had a cousin or brother like that, it would be amazing!! Right?! Her birthday is bloody amazing and I'm so freaking jealous of her. :P Yeah, she's the one person I've always found myself most able to relate to. I love that girl. :) Next one should be up fairly soon, I've just started writing it and it's coming along quite well! :P
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #11, by hedwig13 Needless Worry

21st November 2012:
I love it!!! Ginny: "I need to get home before my husband burns the house down" hahahahahaha! He can save the world but he cant even cook dinner without burning it. Woww..

Rose running into the blond kid (Scorpius most likely) was really cute. I can't wait for them to get to hogwarts.

I loved when Rose came into her room and found the explosion of clothes. It was funny. Especially because I understand Rose's hatred of shopping. It gets tiring after a while.

Again, great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: The sad thing is, I could totally imagine Harry being awful at cooking. :P It wouldn't surprise me in the slightest.

The question is... is it Scorpius or not? ;p I cannot wait for them to get there either! :D I'm getting pretty darn excited myself!

RIGHT?! I absolutely hate shopping. It always seems to be a waste of time and it gets to be obnoxious.

Well thank you, dear! :D Next one should be up fairly soon I hope!

Thanks for the amazing review!

~Mischief_managed18


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Review #12, by Magic_Hogwarts Needless Worry

17th November 2012:
good story

keep on writting

Author's Response: Why thank you!! :D I shall, don't you worry! Next chapter is headed into the queue soon. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #13, by We Are Padfoot and Prongs Needless Worry

30th October 2012:
I like this way, personally. It's cool to have only the diary in first person. Lily seems.. enthusiastic. About everything. :D She does seem the type to be a fashionista. And I like Rose being a tomboy, it's cool. I LOVE it, please continue!

Author's Response: Excellent! Thank you for giving me some feedback on that whole thing. I've written them up and I'm waiting for my beta to check everything before I resubmit chapters 2 and 3. :P One is already up. :)
Haha yeah... Lily is a bit enthusiastic to say the least. And yet, I love her. And Rose just seems to fit the whole tomboy thing. She'll have her glorious beauty moments of course, but she's gotta work her way there in baby steps... very small ones. I'm glad you're enjoying it, more to come soon! :D Thanks for being an amazing reviewer.

~Mischief_managed18


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Review #14, by Gin_gin06 Visits

27th October 2012:
Hey Mischief! Is there any way you can get me that hair potion? That would make mornings so much easier to deal with! :D

As usual, we stopped by the flower store and picked out a large bouquet of sunflowers for Fred, allegedly they were the only flowers Uncle Fred could tolerate.

^I can so see Fred handing out sunflowers that like squirt laughing gas or something like that. LOL

SHE RAN INTO SCORPIUS! AAAHHHAAAHHH!!!
HE'S IN THE NEXT CHAPTER ISN'T HE? I'MA GONNA PEEK!! AWWE HEW IS BUT NOT VERY MUCH!

That chicken sounds amazing! All i had yesterday was a huge play of cheesy bacon fries and candycorn so I'm starving now. hehe.

Happy (early) Halloween! S2 S2 S2,
Gin-gin

Author's Response: Hello miss Gin-gin! :D My goodness I can't even begin to tell you how excited I am to see your name pop up now. :P

That potion would be my new best friend. I mean seriously, how amazing would that be?! It would make everything so freaking easy and blah!

Ohh goodness I could totally see Fred doing that. That would be so awesome. xD

YES SHE DID!! :D You peeked?! BAD GIN-GIN! Lalala oh how I love sir Scorpius...

It's one of the greatest recipes ever... seriously, if you ever want to try it let me know and I can give you full details, it's super easy and it's delicious. My mouth is watering now. BACON FRIES?! That sounds amazing right now haha and I just ate Subway...

Woo! I'm actually going to a Halloween party tonight so that's perfect timing! Happy Halloween to you as well m'dear.

S2 S2 S2,
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #15, by MadiMalfoy Needless Worry

26th October 2012:
Hello again! Tell me, is this possibly going to be a Rose/Scoripus story? :) If it is, yay! Keep it up, I would love to edit it for you :) So far so good!

Author's Response: Hello there my love! :D We seem to be running into each other quite often. ;P It very well possibly could be a Rose/ Scorpius. ;) A magician never reveals her secrets. Hehe. I'd be honored if you would help edit this one for me. I fear it may be riddled with errors. :P Thanks m'dear, and thank you for the lovely review. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #16, by We Are Padfoot and Prongs Visits

4th September 2012:
This chapter is oddly better while listening to Celtic music... Yeah, I'm strange. Anyway.
OMG,OMG,OMG!!! SCORPIUS!!! He's probably thinking 'What, did I do something wrong?!?!' Who did you use in the chapter image, by the way? He's a really good fit.
I like the idea of a third person POV outside the diary because it's kind of like reading the same thing twice this way. Go for it!
Loved it, as usual! Keep going!!!

Author's Response: haha Celtic music?! You're awesome, I wouldn't consider that strange at all. :P
I know, huh. Poor Scorp xD But, don't feel bad for him just yet. *hint hint* Alex Pettyffer. I'm sort of in love with him. :)
You got it, girl! I shall go back through and change that, I think it would be better. :P So thanks for your opinion, love. :)
Glad you enjoyed it.
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #17, by hedwig13 Visits

31st August 2012:
I loved it as usual! I loved how they visited Fred's grave! So sweet! Can't wait to read more when it's posted! and please please please update Fallin'! I check it everyday because I need to know what happens!

Author's Response: Well I'm glad that you did! I feel like she and Al kind of have a really good bond and that's something they sort of continued from a family tradition. More to come fairly soon. I promise, Fallin' is coming. Fairytaled is in the queue but I'm updating Fallin' as soon as it's up! :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #18, by Mitten13 Visits

30th August 2012:
She ran into Scorpius! Update?

Author's Response: Yes she did!! :D Well, I have the next chapter of Fairytaled in the queue (my main story) and then I have to finish off my other next-gen story, all I have left for that one is the epilogue and then I shall post the next chapter for this one. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #19, by Mitten13 Acceptance

30th August 2012:
Very nice! Is the whole story going to take place when she is 10-12 or is her age going to jump around a bit?

Author's Response: Why thank you!! :D It's going to go from her first year all the way through her seventh. There will be times she doesn't write as frequently and such, but I'm hoping to go in order, a lot happens with miss Rose. :P
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #20, by Mitten13 Oddities

30th August 2012:
Cute. Liked the part with the tree:)

Author's Response: Why thank you!! :) I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the chapter, I'm already in love with the idea and I'm glad others are enjoying it as well.
Thank you so much for reviewing. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #21, by HGPotter Oddities

30th August 2012:
I like it! It's a good story. My birthday is August 9th too!

Author's Response: Well thank you, I'm glad to hear it!! :)
Really?! It's my birthday as well. :D We're birthday buddies! haha
Thank you for leaving a review, it means a lot.
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #22, by PainterGal Visits

29th August 2012:
Awesome :) write more about Scorpius soon please :D

Author's Response: Why thank you!! :D There will probably be another chapter or two before he comes into the story again, but he will be briefly mentioned, I promise. xD Trust me, he's one of my all time favorite characters, he'll have a big part. Thank you for reviewing. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #23, by Anonymous Oddities

20th August 2012:
Fantastic story so far. Please write more

Author's Response: Well thank you!! Third chapter is in the queue as we speak so it should be up fairly soon I hope. :) Thank you for leaving a review, it means a lot.
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #24, by hedwig13 Oddities

14th August 2012:
I was reading some of your other reviews. This story is very unique. It has a lot of potential and I am excited to see more. I'm glad you really like Scorose (I think thats is!) because I absolutely love them and they are so cute and not going to lie, you are my favorite author out of all the stories I read. This one is so different from Fallin' and I love it. It's so cool how you can have the same characters and the same romance that everyone already knows is going to happen but you always twist it and I am always pleasantly surprised. The twist in Fallin'. Amazing. Never saw it coming and it totally worked. I'm still waiting for more by the way.I can't imagine what the twist here is going to be. Is Rose going to end up pregnant or something? I don't know. I don't know if I would go the pregnant way though because that's been done before probably many times. I only read one though. Keep writing. Oh- I like to write late at night too. In the winter I stay up late wearing my nice fuzzy robe writing stuff that i guess is kind of fanfiction considering who it is about but is more than that. Again, well done. A good job as always!!!

Author's Response: Well thank you!! Nice of you to say. :D I'm so glad that you're excited! I absolutely love Scorose. They're my OTP. Well, them and Dramione, but seeing as Dramione isn't canon, this couple totally is in my mind. I think their parents almost set them up for that. I'm so glad the little twists and such in Fallin' weren't too expected. xD I was worried about that to be honest. But seriously, you saying I'm one of your favorite authors on here made my day. Thank you. From the bottom of my heart, thank you. And as for the twist in here, I think it'll be a lot more full of drama and twists than people expect and I'm excited to really get this story going. :) I'm glad I'm not the only crazy, late night writer out there. IT just tends to work out so much better that way. :P Thank you for yet another extremely flattering and amazing review. :) I truly appreciate it.
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #25, by hedwig13 Acceptance

14th August 2012:
Thats so awesome that they live in Godric's Hollow. It's a nice way to tie in the books. That was cool how you show Lily and Hugo just learning to fly. I really like how you have Harry and Ginny live next to Ron and Hermione. It makes sense that they'd stay close to each other after being best friends for so long. i also like how the potters always join rose's family for breakfast. It really enforces just how close they are to each other. The owls coming to them while they were flying was funny. I expected them to be at the house waiting for Rose and Albus but i think it was a better idea for the owls to land on the brooms.
And I LOVE the lord or the rings in there. Perfect combination of muggle and wizard world which is a lot of what Hermione represents. Thank you for a wonderful chapter. This story has a lot of promise and I'm looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: In my mind, Harry is quite keen on living in Godric's Hallow. In allowing his kids to be raised in the town he would have been raised in and just getting in touch with the life he would have had, you know? And I think Ron would be pretty intent with living so close to Harry and Ginny. I think they all stay extremely close as they go through life and having them all live in such close proximity kind of reflects that or at least adds to it. They're constantly mingling between families and there's hardly ever a time one of them isn't with a member from the other family. And as for the owl part, it seemed fit for those kids. xD Hehe I love Lord of the Rings and felt that with their being the whole magic concept in their and it tying into muggle culture, it worked. :) Anyways, thanks for the awesome and long review. It made me quite happy. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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