Please update faster!!! Your an amazing writer. I can't stop reading!!!Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I've started the next chapter, so I hope to have it up soon. :)
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I loved this chapter and I love how you included Frankie in it from your other story. or I am just going crazy :P but can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: You're not going crazy, Frankie is there. :) Thank you so much for leaving a review!
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Great work I can not wait for more!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a review. I've already started the next chapter, so I hope to have it up soon. :)
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I love Kieron! And his thick skull :D
Poor Albus having nightmares because of Lily, *hugs him* He doesn't need Kieron picking on him. I'm so glad that the family got pictures though :D
Hehe Frankie! :D
I love that she nearly sits on Albus! Serves him right for sleeping really :D
Haha oh Kieron don't admit outloud that the neighbour has an adorable smile, or at least wait until Nicky is not in the room, although he doesn't mind Nicky looking. I love the threat of breaking though, such a Kieron thing to threaten! :D
Oh Healer Moore is it? Best not be going near my Theo!! *Is jealous* Other then that I do actually really like her and she's doing a favor for Theo and getting to know Lexi. Oh Theo being all cute and such! :D
Aww yay! She's found a pram and a crib!! It's getting so close with the baby and I'm so excited!!! AHHH! That's how excited I am! :D
Oh no! I hope she's having Braxton Hicks and not actually going into labour. They're not ready yet! It's so good that Healer Moore was there.
Say yes to the dishy Healer! He sounds quite yummy and funny! :D Yes! I knew it was Braxton Hicks! :D
Oh Theo! He's so cute when he's worried :D
Aww they're all going to see the nursery and where the babies are, poor Emmett he doesn't seem too happy about that.
Craig is so funny! :D I really like him.
I loved this chapter Sam! I loved how you added the Braxton Hicks and the sexy new Healer being introduced :D
Can't wait for more! Report Review
You know, I don't really hate Tasha at all. People find themselves in bad situations. It happens. When it does, they do the best they can under the circumstances. The story holds together just fine when you tell it from her point of view. She was young and embarrassed and probably terrified of being rejected. From her standpoint, it made more sense to try to go it alone. For me, how I feel about her will depend on what she does from here on out, not what she did before.
Xavier's reaction to things seemed about right for a guy who, because of his profession, doesn't really need other people's support. At least not in the way of needing a place to sleep or something to eat. He took his time and worked through things in his own way. Not the world's most constructive way, mind you, but I guess it works for him.
The meet-up in the park was really cute and well-executed on your part. I loved the way that Ethan just buried his face in Stewart's shirt to begin with. That's the perfect reaction of a 2-year-old who senses that something big is going on, even though the adults are trying to play it down. As Ethan starts to open up, I liked the little similarities you drew out between him and Xavier. It really helped to tie the situation together.
It was nice to take a little break from Al and Lexi's story for a chapter and focus on your other characters. Even better, I think, because Xavier's situation has an obvious bearing on Al's own. It's one of those "there but for the grace of god" kind of moments for Al where he sees how differently things could have gone for him if he and Lexi hadn't chosen to stick together.
I noticed two small typos that you might want to take another look at:
"I have son," Xavier replies quietly. -- a son
It's a completely open question, anyone listening would never know what he means, but we know and we impatiently for Xavier to answer. -- we wait impatiently
Otherwise, it was very well written. Everything flowed nicely and it was a smooth, easy read.
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I love that Harry and Theo are watching ALbus training.
Haha he's questioning Louis, he's very persistant isn't he?
Oh no, Albus has to put his foot in it doesn't he? I hope that they don't argue for long :-(
:O He's gone to see Theo! Theo is so awesome!
Kieron would definately hurt Albus if he heard him, so it's good that he's upstairs.
Aw poor Theo, no wonder he doesn't stay in the same room as his ex *hugs him*
Annie? totally sounds like Tammi :p It's totally me that he wants! YES!
Aw poor Kieron being left in a shop, his mum is so mean!
I get why Lexi is scared that she'll turn out like her.
What did Kieron skip then?
Ahh she knew that he was behind the door the entire time!
I feel so sorry for Theo having to find out more about his daughters love life then he would ever want to know :D
I think that I have now reviewed every single one of your amazing stories :P So you best get updating :p hehe.
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Oh no, Xavier can't be lost :-( I hope he comes back soon.
No! Xavier better be okay :-( Cody is such a great guy, thinking about Xavier, there better be some love there :p
I hope Albus can get Xavier out and to listen to him, he doesn't sound too much like he's ready to listen to anyone.
So Xaviers been talking to Stewart? That's a good step closer to seeing his son!
And he knew that Al would come down? I can't believe that he's been drinking Orange juice! Sneaky Xavier :D
Haha! Louis is in Eclipse :D
I love that they all know that Hugo will get arrested one day, but I can totally see him getting out of the handcuffs.
Aww Ethan is so much like Xavier, and he painted him a picture :D
I don't hate Tasha, I think that she just made a decision whilst scared. I hope that her and Xavier can get along better soon, I know that it'll take some time though. Report Review
You go Darcy! Be angry!
Al sounds like he can definately defend himself against Jessica.
How awesome is it that Lexi has a key to Emmetts place? I wonder if they'll catch him up to anything? :D
His flat sounds amazing! But I'm sad that his family want to keep him away though :-(
AHHH! I knew that they'd catch something! I knew it!!
AHHH! It's Hugo!! :D
Hugo is so awesome! I love him!
I love Darcy and Lexi's interrogation of him :p
Christmas being one big party is fantastic and It's great how everyone is invited!
Hehehe Frankie! :D
Ahh! Al is making Emmett and Hugo tell Ron :D
And Al and Lexi kissed!!
Totally the best chapter ever!
Awww Ginny's reason for picking Severus as a middle name was so sweet :D
Er!! Excuse me! But why is my husband flirting with another lady?
OMG!! Kieron propsed!! KIERON PROPOSED!!! I am so happy!
OMG!! Xavier has seen his son!
I hope that Xavier can see him, Stewart seems so awesome!
So much stuff happened in this chapter!! I love it so much!! :D
AHH! I can't wait for more!! :D Report Review
Yes! I love that you said that about playing Quidditch! It's not that much of a physical sport, maybe you get good arm muscles from being a Beater but that's about it, and it's probably only one arm!
Haha! Xaviers not allowed near Cody!! Brilliant! Although Cody seems really cool so I can understand why he'd want to go near him :p
Xavier is so funny talking about marrying Cody, please tell me that they get together and it's not just joking!! :D
Why did Al choose right then to ask about the baby? Right before the big match, oh Albus.
Hey Jason's there! Glad that he's feeling a bit better, but uh-oh Jessica and her awkwardness has arrived :S
Jessica really needs to go away! Did she not hear me earlier when I told her to go away?
Xavier is so great with Jason, he's going to be an awesome dad!
Oh Christmas is going to be drama filled, I can just feel it :D
Off to the next wonderful chapter! :D Report Review
Yay Theo!! *hugs onto him and never lets go*
He's stealing breakfast and breaking into their house with his own key, he's so cool! :D
I love that him, Ginny and Harry all had a bet going on about Al and Lexi getting together :p
So the story is finally out? I wonder how Jessica is going to react to that one?
Aww poor Theo not having a good time during the war :-( *hugs onto him tighter*
I love that Kieron publicly kissed Dom! He's so awesome! I love that he basically does what he wants and doesn't care what people think :p
Theo is definately the best dad ever, he's right up there with Harry, He gives his kids such awesome live advice and teaching them how to fend for themselves.
I can already tell that the parties going to be fun.
Ah Jessica has found out, and she's being evil.
Seriously can't wait for more! :D Report Review
This is my 1003rd review!! (I totally missed my 1000th, but it was defiantely on one of your stories :D)
Go Chris! Talking sense into Albus, he needs some sense knocked into him.
I hope Albus gets Lexi the best birthday present ever.
Ginny being able to control Albus with a look is hilarious, my dad can do that with me, it's terrifying haha.
I wonder how many people are going to suggest their name for the baby? I suggested my name to my friend when she was pregnant but she ended up having a boy so it didn't work out :-(
Harry and Ginny are so cute! I love that Ginny named Albus, Harry always seems to get the blame for that one.
Uh-oh Al's seen Jessica. GO AWAY JESSICA!
I'm glad that Al and Lexi talked, and now they're going on dates and the baby kicked!!!
Cuteness factor overload at the end! I loved it! :D Report Review
He's so cute being scared of that part of the hospital, he's such a guy :p
So that's how Emmett knew? I thought he was being extremely clever.
It's so exciting that she took Emmett to the scan, but I hope that the baby being small isn't going to be a problem at all :-(
Aww yay! She's gone to see Theo and has brought a cheeseburger with her, so he likes cheeseburgers aye? *makes a note in her stalking Theo notebook*
Haha I loved when Theo said "Why do I need to know this?" about her sleeping with Albus, she tells him everything doesn't she? :D
Uh-oh Jessica is not going to like Lexi looking after her little brother, I hope it doesn't cause too many problems.
Yay!! Albus and Lexi are no longer bumpy :D
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It's good that she had a good time, but I want her and Albus to be together! *is so impatient*
I also want poor Xavier to find out about his kid! :-( *hugs Xavier*
We're getting closer to Lexi finding out about feelings :D yay! She's worked it out! Go Xavier!
And yes she told Rich that she's pregnant and he's being okay with it, that's good. Yes! She doesn't feel anything for him! That leaves more love for Albus! :D
Ethan is so much like Xavier and he hasn't ever met him, I really hope he knows soon.
Ahh! Nearly naked Albus!
Him and Lexi are so cute around each other :p
Oh no! Now things are bumpy between them :-( why did you do this to me? Why can't they be happy?
See you in the next brilliantly written chapter!! :D Report Review
Oh Albus, I just want to hug him. *hugs Albus*
He really needs to tell her his feelings so that they can be one massive happy family!
I can understand why Theo doesn't like that dress by the way it sounds, he's so protective.
Oh Albus why did you have to say that? :-(
I want Rich to find out that she's pregnant, as mean as that is I want her and Albus to be together. I wonder if he'll take it well though?
Oh Kieron being protective :D He could definately break Albus with just words :p
Poor Xavier with Tasha.
I really like him he's so wise, and I really hope that he can find his baby.
Another brilliant chapter, I'm off to read the next one! Report Review
This chapter was really lovely! I really like the dynamic between all of the characters, especially because Al seems to be the one who has to sort out so many of their problems! Haha. I thought everything between Xavier and Ethan was so sweet, and you wrote those moments so well. I also think you've done a great job with the Xave/Tasha/Stewart situation. I can't wait to read more about it! 10/10
Cassie :)Author's Response: Al is the problems fixer. He hates confrontation and stress. He's such a worrier. :D
I'm glad you liked the moment between Xavier and Ethan. Thank you so much for leaving a review, Cassie!
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"i sleep in my underwear" ahahahaa that was greattt lol okay bye:)Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line as much as I did. Thank you so much for leaving a review.
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I really like how Albus hates quidditch, it's very different and original.
Albus has a secret friend? I hope we get to meet him one day!
I wonder how everyone is going to react to Rich going to the night out?
Oh Emmett, I love him so! I really love that he only seemed to be offended by the feaky comment :D
Haha I was thinking that Emmett was Sherlock too! :D He's so clever! And I totally shop Sherlock/Watson :D
Poor Al at the end being all jealous, I want him to tell her so they can live happily ever after! :D Report Review
I hope that their friends take it well and that none of them react badly.
It's so funny that Louis is still trying it on with the Healer, I wonder if he'll ever stop, or manage to get a date?
They already know? haha, they're brilliant! and I think it's great that Al and Lexy want to keep the babys gender a secret, that's going to be a nice surprise at the end.
I wonder who Emmett is dating? Mmm I want to find out :D I hope he's nice!
I really love how close all of the friends are and how well you've written them, it's easy to see from the way that you've written them that they're going to be great friends for a very long time. They're so at ease with each other and really care for each other a lot. Fantastic writing :D Report Review
Will Kieron ever forgive Albus? :D
I love how wild Lily is, she's excellent!
Oh wow drunk Chris is smart for working that out, but yay someone else knows :D and he is definately right about Albus liking Alexa.
I really like Chris, he is so cool and a very good friend. I love that everyone wants them to name the baby after them, if they choose a name from everyone it's going to be one long name so it's good that they're not :D
I love that Chris is now sleeping on the couch, I wonder how long he'll end up staying for?
I did recognise Ewan and Will :D I love it so much that your stories connect with each other! Really really love it :D
Another wonderful chapter my lovely :D Report Review
Poor Albus having Lily as an alarm clock, I bet he'll miss that when he moves out :p
Harry is so funny, making jokes about Al and Alexa and the last time they had a party, I love him.
Al is definately right about Alexa's family being intimidating, I really wouldn't want to get on the wrong side of them.
I like hearing about where Aurors train, and how much thought you've put into it all, such as how they train and what their choices are for their last year. It all reminds me of the training in Vampire Academy :D Theo should totally turn up and be the Dimitri and then someone could be the Rose. I mean er.
I love that Theo only seemed to agree to them taking the beds because Daphne said no :D I hope we see more between them.
No we can't have a sad Theo! If he wants I can so live there with him :D
I can't wait for the party to start! I wonder if anyone will find out somehow? Report Review
I love it and I think that Tasha was scared, it does not make it right but I still think that she is a good person.Author's Response: Yeah, she was scared. But she is good. I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for leaving a review. :)
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Look at Albus being uncomfortable and all cute :D
He's so funny when he was telling Healer Moore about his 'symptoms' :D
Yay! They saw their baby! and I hope that Alexa doesn't get morning sickness either.
I'm glad that Astoria helped get a maternity ward in the hospital and that Draco donated money.
Louis is there and hurt? Oh my what did he do? He is brilliant and funny and has a lot of nerve to flirt with the Healer, and do an extremely good job of it as well, until the ending when he was shut down!
Oh no she's got her sickness :-( I can see this being a long few months for her.
I can't wait to read more, I love how you write Albus and Alexa together, they seem so much like the best of friends and they're so comfortable around each other. :D Report Review
It's great to see the 'Grandads' talking in hushed whispers, I wonder what they've got planned?
Er that estate agent better not be flirting with our Theo! Unless it's secretly one of us! Although I don't blame her, how could she resist his awesome charms?
They should so be room mates!! and maybe more... but for now room mates!
It's kinda like a proposal haha but with an apartment instead of a ring :D
I yay a lot :D
Haha Harry is so funny going all red and spluterry :D
Oh Theo of course she's always going to be spending more of your money, she is your little girl! :D
That estate agent is definately good at her job.
I love that they're looking at apartments together, they're such grown ups now. And that they're embarassed by the Weasley car hehe.
I think that they're going to want the house, Theo and Harry better be prepared to part with more money I'm thinking.
Awww oh Alexa she's so cute getting all worked up like that. and pulling the puppy dog look and the pouted lip to get around Theo, and how he cracks at seeing it. Dad's can never resist that look!
"It's an apartment with stairs," I love Al's line!
Yay! They got the house!! Theo is awesome! :D Report Review
Yay!! Albus's POV telling his family, I wonder if they'll react like Alexa's family?
Aww Albus keeps thinking of that night, I think he might like Alexa, more then friends :D
Harry is such a great supportive dad, I hope he still will be when he finds out what Albus wants to tell them.
Oh my god! Kieron turned up before Louis, Albus is right to be scared, I would be terrified.
And he told them and then chased Albus! Poor Albus!
Poor poor Albus being hurt and dealing with Theo who's skilled in Occlumency.
I love how Albus thinks about Alexa, it's clear how much he cares about her and would do anything for her.
Theo and Harry are definately the best dad's ever! And Kieron is a great protective older brother.
Theo's threat of coming after him if he ever leaves or hurts her was scary. I wouldn't want to get on the wrong side of him.
Haha oh Louis! He's so great just walking in at the end like that and knowing instantly.
Brilliant chapter! I want to see Theo mad but I don't want him to hurt anyone :S I just want more Theo!! :D I think we need to start a Theo fan club? Report Review
I love Theo! :D He's so cheeky! I bet he has lots of plans for when his daughter moves out, he'll have no choice but to be a womaniser!
He is definately the coolest dad ever.
I wonder when they're going to tell their parents? I can't wait to see Theo's reaction, and Kieron's I think Albus might have to hide for a while. His plan to hide for eighteen years and eight months might be a good one :D
I can't wait to see more of Nicky and Kieron, I just know that they're going to be awesome!
oo what happened in the summer? And poor Albus guilt tripped into going shopping.
Awww Theo, I'll be there for you whilst Daphne is there :D
Oh wow, Astoria must be a psychic if she can guess that quickly.
I'm scared for Alexa, I hope it's going to go as well as it can do, she's very brave telling them all on her own.
So Kieron and doesn't like his mum? That'll be interesting to read :D
I love how much tension there is with Daphne being in the room, everyone must really hate/dislike her.
Oh no! Kierons gone! Oh Albus you better run!
VPBC? What is this mysteriousness?
Oh no!! Why? Why must there be such an awesome cliffhanger? It's a good thing I can just go straight to the next chapter! Report Review
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