i enjoyed this story very much! it was quite original and beautiful and your writing style is very developed, especially considering this is your first fan fiction. overall, i thought this was strong and creative and exciting and i am very pleased to have read it. keep up the wonderful writing!Author's Response: Why, thank you! It's good to hear that the language is also understandable since English is not my native language ;) As I just commented on the previous review, another fic has been laying around for a while now, still waiting for me to finish it (might take quite a while...). Report Review
WOW. That's is all I can say. I listened to the song, while I read. I had tears in my eyes, you're a fabulous writer ! I would love to read more song-fics by you. Bravo ! This certainly deserves a 10/10.Author's Response: The best thing to achive as a writer is to be able to evoke emotions, so thank you very much! I've been working on another song fic for a few months already but I'm stuck because I don't know which storyline to follow... Hopefully I'll get it ready someday (:
I'm sorry it took me so long to answer, HPFF has for some reason not allowed me to see the unanswered reviews for quite a while. Report Review
Great story, even better with the actual song as a backdrop. It can be hard to convey a full range of emotions in a limited form, but I believe you have done just that.
Thank you! Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! The song is really one of my favourites of all the music I've heard, nice to know I'm not the only one thinking it fits to the story. There were many things left unwritten but it is good to leave something for the reader. Report Review
this is what i've been looking for..!!! what a fun read. it was really amazing. the stucture is really neat, and although i am longing for more, how it ended is perfect. thanks for writing this!Author's Response: Great that you liked it, thanks (: Report Review
It was definitely not hard to follow, and I thought that was simply incredible! You write wonderfully and I just wished it hadn't stopped there!
It wasn't boring or unoriginal at all, you put your own spin on it, and I thought it was well structured and written, Thank you! xAuthor's Response: Oh wow, this is such a joy to hear! Thank you for lifting my writer's spirit ;) - LB Report Review
Found it interesting, and liked all but the sex scene.. otherwise,, good writing, lease keep it up.Author's Response: I wonder what was wrong with that particular scene. I must admit, it's not my favourite part either but the story felt strange without it (though I tried to leave most of the Dramione-cliches away ;D). Thanks for reviewing (: -LB Report Review
It was really, really good and I have never read a story like this! Its awesome :)Author's Response: Thank you so much, Johanna, nice to know what you thought of it (: - LB Report Review
I have read this at least fift times kind of story. I actually wish that you would continue it!Author's Response: Funny, I personally don't know if I consider a story that good if it seems too familiar and I'm thinking I might have read before. But I take your words as a compliment since you would like to know what happens afterwards ;) I have an idea about that but I'm not sure whether I want to put it into words. But thank you for reading and reviewing the story (: -LB Report Review
I liked the story. I liked the detailed discription. It wasn't boring at all in my opinion. And yes I would consider reading another story from you.Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story and giving feedback! Good to hear that you didn't lose interest in the story while reading ;) - LB Report Review
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