5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by luvinpadfoot Interlude I: James Sirius Potter

15th August 2012:
Ooh, a good beginning! I love AU stories about the Potter family when Lily, Al, and James aren't their only kids. It really livens it up!

I liked the brief introductions in the first chapter. All of the kids make me smile. And this scene at the hospital was cute. It's sometimes hard to remember that right now James Potter would just be a little boy! :)

Great beginning! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

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Review #2, by Rosie Interlude I: James Sirius Potter

13th June 2012:
Interesting however too many "thank-yous"

Author's Response: Sorry, this is my first real experience in writing (other than school) as well as fanfiction, so i get a bit excited at such as positive response! thanks :)

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Review #3, by RomioneWriter Life in the Potter Household

10th June 2012:
For your first fanfic this is really good :D I quite enjoyed it and I hope you continue to write! I recommend just checking over everything before you post it because I spotted a few tiny mistakes :) Really good job! :)

Author's Response: Wow! This is a real confidence booster, so Thank you :) i've never been too good on the technical side of writing- but i'll try to make sure everything is correct.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :D x

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Review #4, by potters Life in the Potter Household

9th June 2012:
Keep it coming! :) i like it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! i going to add chapters on each of the kids describing them in more detail than i've got here. this is just kind of an introduction i suppose.
Thank you again for reading and reviewing it means a lot x

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Review #5, by nvdks Life in the Potter Household

9th June 2012:
not such a bad writer...but real weird stuff.

Author's Response: Thanks! this is my first experience with writing anything but essays for school. it is quite weird thinking of the Potter's with more than 3 kids i suppose but i really like the idea.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) x

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