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Review #1, by Grace3 Is there such thing as a lovely mud-blood?

10th December 2012:
This is a good good good story. Bella is so aweful cant believe she did that to her own sister, but of course its bella and its rather expected of her. Hopefully Dora would finally open her eyes and see her sister for who she truly is a horrible person. Ted is such a sweatheart i felt so sorry for him and he was very kind to forgive her that quick.

Author's Response: thanks so much, it might be awhile before I go back to this story I didn't really have the plot sorted out very well but i'm glad you enjoyed it and the charecters :D

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Review #2, by Lady Penelope Rouge The start of it all

5th July 2012:
This was quite interesting. The plot is rather good, but there are several grammatical errors here and there that need correcting. The story in itself is great, but these few errors can distract the reader from the story... I would suggest that you get help from a beta... Then the story will get much more enjoyable! ;)

Author's Response: I sure will, i think i'll do it now because i'll forget (i'm extremly 4getful) ijust wanted to tell you that you are my first review so thank-you

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