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Review #1, by slytherinprincess0198

1st August 2012:

awesome story! can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! We plan to :) Glad you like it :))

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Review #2, by luvinpadfoot

The Journey Begins

30th July 2012:

Haha this is a great story! Amber and Carla really make an awesome pair! Carla's pranks really make me crack up and Amber's history intrigues me. I know her father's a death eater, but what else happened?

And Carla's nightmares- what causes them? (Besides the obvious answer of her father's absence, of course.) They're both interestingly complex characters and I can't wait to see more of them!

Are the trio going to be in this at all? It would be interesting to see them from an outsider's point of view. I assume Amber isn't a fan, but other than that I honestly haven't got a clue!

I love that you guys are alternating chapters and characters, it really adds a lot to the story and it's such an original idea. I don't think I've ever seen it done before.

I really can't wait to read more and see what House Amber's in! It's a great idea for a story! Looking forward to more updates! =)

Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you like it so far :) don't worry, the golden trio definitely makes an appearence.

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