The thing that first drew me into this story was the title, Wibbly. I thought it was a funny title and it made me chuckle :D How did you come up with that title? I am intrigued! XD But I really think this story has potential, so keep writing! :) And I love the whole dead brain cells thing - it could be her excuse for a lot of things! And also the way her hair ate the snitch!

Author's Response: Thank you :D The title actually comes into play later so I won't tell you now ;) sorry! but hopefully it will be worth while to stick with it. Dead brain cells pretty much explains my life, haha, glad you liked it so far and thanks for the review!
~Ria

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Okay so at first I was all: Another Cliched Love Of A Clumsy Girl, we've all heard one. But then when she caught the snitch with her hair...favoriting story as we speak. :) Love it, that girl's got spunk.

Author's Response: this review honestly made my day! thank you! When I started this my deepest fear was that it would be an utter cliche, but I agree, my main goal was to give Piper spunk :P

Thanks for the review and the next chapter is already in the queue so it should be up soon :)
~Ria

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I think it has potential, and it could be a very interesting story. But be careful, because if feels a little too...run-on-y? Like it just keeps going and going without pause, without actually saying anything important. But the plot line looks good, so keep it up!

Author's Response: Yeah, I see what you mean about the running on, but, fair warning, it was written for Nano Wrimo so I tend to run on a tad to add up a few words :P
Thanks for the review :)
~Ria

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