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Review #1, by MissesWeasley123 part two

3rd February 2014:
Oh god, this is so good. I love it, I love everything.

While I do love the previous chapter a bit more than this (only because of the way you wrote Parvati -- so beautiful) this was still amazing.

I loved the focus on George. His pain is always so tough to read. You made it very evident and it was tough -- it wasn't anything but that. It was absolutely painful to read, because of the emotions you were playing with. Angelina -- the girl they had both shared. It was almost agonizing. It was as if George was trying to live for Fred. Really, really heartbreaking.

I never like reading Fleur, but god, you just write her so well -- I am in love. Especially the ending, it was tear jerking. Because Victoire had saved the family, she was the distraction they all needed. I think you worded it beautifully.

You writing is always like poetry. It is such a pleasure to read, and I love it so much. It is never unnatural or choppy -- but it flows and you are so talented m'dear.

Congrats on finishing!

Author's Response: Nadia! Thank you so much for reviewing!

George's part was the first one that was finished and I'm glad you loved this. And Fleur. Well, I'M not a fan of Fleur either, but most of the time when I don't like a character, I just sit down and write about them and it kinda helps? :P The bit of Victoire actually came to me as I was finishing up and I thought it came to a lovely conclusion on that note. It was fitting, somehow.

Thank you so much for reviewing - seriously you are amazing. xx

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Review #2, by MissesWeasley123 part one

1st February 2014:
So hi. You are perfect and so is this. Update please?

What can I say about this piece. I love it. It is one of my most favourite pieces you have ever written, but then again I adore everything you ever write. I'm trying to hit 400 reviews today, and I wanted to make sure I reviewed something of yours as I make the push.

Literally everything about this was great. Parvati's section was my favourite. The scene and imagery you staged was beautiful. Everything. From the smell and her surroundings, I don't know how you do it so well! I will say it over and over again, you have talent like no other. Your writing style is so unique and deserves to be recognized.

But her relationship with Seamus was breathtaking. I thoroughly enjoyed it. You are wonderful. He was her saviour and wah. I love them.

Hermione! You wrote her complex mind so well. And then Neville and Hannah. Please, I need the second chapter of this. Please keep on writing this story. I know it's been a while, but it deserves an ending. You are absolutely brilliant and I admire your writing style.

Honestly, amazingly written. I loved it. ♥

Author's Response: Nadia! 400 reviews is amazing! Anyone lucky enough to get your reviews must be thrilled. Congrats on reaching them! (I just checked) I'm honored to have been thought of!

Thank you so much! This is an oldie - but still a favorite of mine, too. It's been nagging me since forever, but sometimes muses hide from you ;) I'm still playing hide and seek with this one, glimpsing her in between the trees at times.

Pavarti is wonderful and I loved writing her. Surprisingly, that part was the easiest one to write.

Hermione is my one and only, I'm so happy you liked her. Thank you so much for all those wonderful words - it truly means a lot. xx

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Review #3, by A fan who is in shock because dude, you're talented. part one

5th December 2013:
Holy flipping hell this was beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! This really means a lot! I'm so happy you liked this xx

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Review #4, by Eve part one

5th January 2013:
You always leave me in tears.

Whats even more startling is that I can't stop reading.

- More please.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!

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Review #5, by saraie12 part one

24th June 2012:
Wow, dark and extremely well written. I'd love to read on!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm going to update this soon enough. Thank you so much for reviewing.

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Review #6, by bester_jester part one

20th June 2012:
Haha here's my real review - accidently sent in that last smiley face by itself!

(btw, the smile was meant to be my face right now).

First story I've read by you (and I checked your page, you have heaps!) and it was amaaazing. Fantastic characterisation, prose and feelings.

I loved the first bit about Parvati the best. The way you described hers and Lavender's conversations, and how they were going to live together... so sad.

I found Hermione's bit a bit (eek so many 'bits') confusing in how it was written. It was great, but yeah. Sort of hard to follow in places. I did love how Ron found her though, and 'his voice saying my name' rah rah rah was so lovely.

Okay, i'ma stop now. Lovely, really really lovely writing. Now off to read the rest of your stories!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's so sweet of you to say. Hermione's bit is a lot more choppy, which is actually how I usually write. the two others are more similar. I loved writing Parvati's too! It was actually the one that started it all. Thank you so much for reviewing, it really means a lot.

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Review #7, by bester_jester part one

20th June 2012:

Author's Response: haha Thank you

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Review #8, by jkelly part one

19th June 2012:
Keep writing!! You have a real talent. Having fought in a war and lost friends, your characters emotions are spot on. Really enjoyed it hope to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This will be updated soon enough. I just have to get some other stuff out of the way. I haven't forgotten about it!

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Review #9, by magicinthemoonlight29 part one

16th June 2012:
You are perfection, and you write perfection.

My words pale in comparison to this stunning piece of art, so I won't even bother.

Perfect. Simply perfect.

Author's Response: See, I logged in today, feeling completely miserable about my ability to write. Feeling like a failure and then I saw this. You made my day and thank you - thank you so much for your kind words and for leaving a review.

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