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Review #1, by 800 words of heaven Of Potions and Troublemakers

25th April 2014:

Aww! I'm so sad that this is just a one-shot! I really want to see how their relationship develops. It's one chapter and I'm already shipping them :P

Ah, I can totally relate to Padma. I'm always anxious about quizzes, and whilst I don't understand that single-minded focus on a career path, I totally get wanting to get good grades.

I can see Declan being a mellowing influence on Padma as their relationship grows (which it shall in my head since it's a one-shot). Maybe she'll rub off on him, and he won't get into so much trouble. Or maybe, he'll totally take advantage of her prefect status so that they can spend hours after curfew in secluded corridors...

I got way into this story, I think ;) But that's the mark of good writing, no? You definitely had me sucked into Padma and Declan's little world (and shipping them like crazy, even though they literally interacted for like five minutes). Alas, my shipper heart shall desperately hope for some continuation...

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had a lot of fun writing this little piece of fluff. Probably wouldn't have even thought of it if it hadn't been assigned for a challenge, but I'm so glad it was.

I was never going to continue this further, but in my head they do continue to date and learn from each other and just generally be happy people. Because I say so. And why not.

I think what I wanted from this was just to make them two very real characters, especially Padma. And she is a Ravenclaw after all. Thanks so much for the lovely review! It made my day and put a smile on my face. :)

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Review #2, by Xanthe Of Potions and Troublemakers

30th June 2012:
Will you please make a sequel about their date. This story was too good to end too soon. Very good. Hope to hear more!

Author's Response: Aw, it's great you want more, although I think Padma and Declan's story won't be continued. Thanks for reviewing! I always appreciate it!

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Review #3, by orderofphoenix Of Potions and Troublemakers

2nd June 2012:
pretty good story so ya all i have to say

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #4, by Cavell Of Potions and Troublemakers

2nd June 2012:
This was a lovely one-shot, and I love how you've written Padma and Sue and Declan, because they seem so realistic and easy to relate to. This was such a nice read that I actually really enjoyed and I wonder why it hasn't been reviewed yet, honestly. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! That was exactly what I was going for in the characters! I'm so glad you noticed and reviewed!

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