oh fun :) please update soon, i really like the beginning of the story! :) xx

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this story is very interesting! unlike another and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!

Next chapter is in the queue and adds some drama - hope you like it!

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I really like your story. I'm definitely going to come back for more. Keep this up :)

Author's Response: Thank you!
I hope you keep reading and enjoying it :)

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Amazing plot so far. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, thanks!
Next chapter is in the queue, hope you like it! :)

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I loved it...that was adorsibly cute and sweet. I can't wait to see some payton-james interaction!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

You know, I was getting really anxious for it too but was originally going to prolong their meeting until like, Chapter 6 or 7 but when I read your review I was like - YES, I'm not the only one! So I got really excited and threw him in early, haha.

Thanks again for the review, hope you like the story!

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The relationship between Marie and Payton is scarily realistic... It reminds me of my relationship with my sibling...
As always, this was very well-written with hardly any mistakes at all. Your style is genuine and fun to read.
I'm really excited to read this new story in addition to "Here's to..." :)

Author's Response: I'm very lucky to have a lot of older siblings that I have good relationships with but with a lot of sisters, I can understand fighting like they do.
Thanks for reviewing! Next chapter to "Here's to..." is in the queue and as my first-born story - its my first priority, but I'll try to get a handle for steady posting on this one as well.



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Keep up the great work! I like Payton a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks! She's a lot of fun to write. I'm glad you like it, and I hope you continue to read and enjoy!

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Lol the dinner was funny... Good job

Author's Response: It was definitely my favorite to write. Thanks for reviewing! I hope you keep reading :)

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