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Review #1, by ms4aisa Chapter 1:Best Friends

29th May 2012:
Heeei :) So I really liked this chapter, it's interesting and funny, but I think you really need to go over it again. especially at the beginning you mixed "I" and "she" up a lot and it's quite confusing...
but aside from that, it's really good and I'm excited to see where you're going with it :) well done!

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