haha brilliantly funny story. James is so ruddy cute lol and don't worry, for a first fic it's very good. I can't wait to read more of your stories :)

Author's Response: Eeepp! Thank you so much! You have no idea how happy I get when I get reviews :D
And also, I have a novel that's in the queue and should be out sometime veryyy soon, so if you wanna check it out...
Thanks again!
My Day = Made
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I must applaud your first attempt at fanfiction. Many people don't have great first stories; you've done remarkably well. I can tell that you've been reading fanfiction for a while. I must say, though, that I don't think you should add any more to this story in any way. Half of writing is knowing when to stop.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! It really makes my day when I get feedback. Especially positive ones!
Haha..I was extremely nervous when publishing it, because who knows how others will take it? So thanks again!
Yes, I have been reading for a long time ;)
Agreed. I wrote this fully intending to stop where I have.
Though, if I had any intention to continue, it's all gone now because I have so many different ideas on what to write, and I wanna try a bit of this and a bit of that, I have no idea when I'll get everything done.
I'm taking this one of those amazing experiences in my life so hopefully if you thought this was good, I can create some truly amazing works of art like I read around the site. But those are honestly works of art. If I can get one tenth of what some people have, I'd be happy. Still trying, but happy.
Going off track, but what I meant to say was: Thank youuu!

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It was great for a first try - you could even turn it into a series of one-shots for their next year, or a full blown story!

Author's Response: Thank you!
And yes, I might possibly end up doing that!

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Awwh that was cute. I liked it alot!!!

Author's Response: Thank youuu!
For reading, reviewing AND liking this story :D
I'm got so many plot bunnies running aroung my head that I'm trying to put as many as I can on pen to paper. So I won't say no if you wanna check out my page!
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I love your story. I hope u add more so we can find out how everyone reacts to them being together.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Hmm...I may, but it was originally meant to be a one-shot, so we'll see how things go.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
:)

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very good, i doubt this was your first story though

Author's Response: Thank you! Being my very first reviewer, you've got a special place in my heart.
I've read HPFF for a looong time before I finally worked up the courage to write my own story. So thanks again!
:)

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