aww very cute. I think you did a pretty great job! There were only a few problems, just words that hadn't been spaced apart. Other than that I loved how you did the Weasley family part. How Ron kinda nudged him in even if he didn't really want to, it's different than how other people do it. Even me :P I'm doing a story like this too so I wanted to get more ideas how other people are. I really liked this. If you ever have time to r/r mine it'd be fun to get your opinion. I have 11 chapters already, but it's always fun to bounce ideas off each other. Anyway, Great Job! Report Review
Not a bad start, I am glad that you got Harry & Ginny back together without Ron messing it up. I hope in the next and later chapters you made Harry stand on his two feet and not be afraid of tell Ron where to go when he finds out about Harry & Ginny sleeping together. I hope Harry knows what he wants and goes for it. Report Review
It's amazing for a starting chapter :) can't wait to read more!!! Report Review
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