{reviewid: 2760318, reviewer: 'Belinda'}
28th December 2012:
QUESTION!! Whose your chara?? The guy in the cover chap?? The Actor I meant.
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2739580, reviewer: 'MsJacksonMalfoyMellark'}
13th September 2012:
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I was waiting for so long for the next chapter of this story to come and now, it's finally here! Yay! Love, love, love! Can't wait to read more of this! :D
Update the next chapter soon please! :D
Author's Response: Awh... The sweetest comment ever!! hahaha...thank u so much for liking this story =)
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2739375, reviewer: 'AriesA76'}
12th September 2012:
I like this so far, can't wait for more..
Author's Response: Thank you AriesA76... Keep on reading!! xoxo
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2729717, reviewer: 'Jasmine%20fitzpatrick'}
9th August 2012:
that was so rude at the end pour hermione
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2729706, reviewer: 'Jasmine%20fitzpatrick'}
| Review #5, by Jasmine fitzpatrick | Secret |
9th August 2012:
aww draco is in love
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2729697, reviewer: 'Jasmine%20fitzpatrick'}
9th August 2012:
wow that was kinda cool I gess
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2729692, reviewer: 'Jasmine%20fitzpatrick'}
9th August 2012:
aww that was so sweet and Draco is starting to like her
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2729686, reviewer: 'Jasmine%20fitzpatrick'}
9th August 2012:
wow draco was alittle rude at the end
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2729682, reviewer: 'Jasmine%20fitzpatrick'}
9th August 2012:
wow never knew draco to be sad befor
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2729674, reviewer: 'Jasmine%20fitzpatrick'}
9th August 2012:
this is really good I love this story
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Im glad you like it. Hey, check out my other story too..'Fragile Heart' xoxo
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2723687, reviewer: 'granger_'}
23rd July 2012:
Oh..my..gosh..LISA WHITE.. that muggle bitch i seriously HATE her...I love this story..you are really talented for thinking of a brilliant story like this but please update fast please I really want to see what happens next..poor Hermione 10/10 X
Author's Response: Awwwh.thank you so much for your support... I'll try to update faster but since I just started a new semester, my schedule is quite pack, so I need to steal some time to write ;-) Thanks again...
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2717966, reviewer: 'Elleinad'}
| Review #12, by Elleinad | Secret |
9th July 2012:
I loved this! Please update soon! I think Hermione should beat Lisa up, muggle style! :)
Author's Response: Haha, she should be beaten up by Hermione. She have no idea that she mess with the wrong person, but we'll see about that. Keep reviewing! Thanks for reading. xoxo
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2717849, reviewer: 'granger_'}
| Review #13, by granger_ | Secret |
9th July 2012:
So love this story... Can't believe his wand got stolen :o .. Please update ASAP.. ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Thanks for loving this story as well as spending your time to read it. The next chapter is waiting for validation. xoxo
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2717676, reviewer: 'olivandershappenings'}
9th July 2012:
AH WRITE MORE!!! THIS IS SO GOOD!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad that you like it!!
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2716969, reviewer: 'steph%20winchester'}
| Review #15, by steph winchester | Secret |
7th July 2012:
Omg !!! Please continue to write this story !!!
Author's Response: I will. Thank you so much for your support. (^_^)
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2715563, reviewer: 'JazzysGirl'}
3rd July 2012:
It's sad to know that's high school life.
Anyway I love the story! At first I was a little iffy about it but I guess I just got sucked in. Love it with all my heart. Update soon!
10/10
Author's Response: So sweet of you! thank you for your support. xoxo
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2711856, reviewer: 'klnyx'}
23rd June 2012:
HOW COULD HE HAVE TAKEN HIS WAND TO SCHOOL ARGH
Author's Response: Hahaha... A wizard will never leave his wand. Anything might happen :-P He did made a mistake for leaving it in the class though, he was late and rushed for P.E class.
Thank you so much for the review! Love it! xx
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2711854, reviewer: 'klnyx'}
23rd June 2012:
lisa white, gosh, i'm lovvin this story.
Author's Response: Haha...Thank you. I'm glad you like it
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2709444, reviewer: 'Emily'}
17th June 2012:
Really good work can't wait for next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks...I'm glad you like it...
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2707239, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
11th June 2012:
I really really like the plot of this story. However, if I may be so bold, it would greatly improve your story if you edited your spelling, grammar, punctuation and sentence structure. By editing, you improve the readability for your audience.
Also, when writing the dialogue, be mindful of the characters and how they would speak and the language they would use. For example, Brits don't say mom, they say Mum.
Again, I REALLY like the plot and I think that this could turn into a great story but you need to clean it up a bit.
Author's Response: Ok, thank you sooo much! I really appreciate it. It's helpful to me. I didn't really know about the 'mom' and 'mum' though, as I am not a native speaker of English. Thanks for the information. Feel free to help me again in the future so that I can improve my English. Again, Thank you so much, Anonymous.
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2706959, reviewer: 'MoonlightFaerae'}
10th June 2012:
This is an amazing story line and you write it really well, I can't wait to see how this plays out and I'm sure you won't dissapoint! Just please don't abandon it, its to good to be abandoned!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You made my day (^_^). Thank you! Thank you! xx
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2705637, reviewer: 'granger_'}
7th June 2012:
I love this story please update soon
Author's Response: I'm so glad someone loves it. Thanks for spending some times to read my story
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2703176, reviewer: 'Andreaa'}
30th May 2012:
Aww I cried a little. Narcissa's love for her son is touching. More dramione. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Andreaa! Loves Dramione *wink~
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2702953, reviewer: 'DracoBadassMalfoy'}
30th May 2012:
nice xD
Can you check out what i've written too?
Report Review |
{reviewid: 2701136, reviewer: 'Kate'}
25th May 2012:
Love the story and idea
Hurry with the next chapter please
Love the way you write
Thanks
10/10
Hurry!
Author's Response: Thank you Kate... You really made my day. The next chapter is still waiting for validation.
Report Review |