i'm speechlessly in love with this. seriously- this is such a great piece of writing and i can just see the conflict within pansy and the calmness and possible confusion within susan. you write them both so well, and so alive and so beautiful and raw. i don't even know how to begin telling you how much i adore this story. :)
~M

Author's Response: I forgot I wrote this, tbh. It was written for a friend's birthday - femmeslash isn't something I generally write - but I'm thrilled you're enjoying it. I'm blushing so much right now, though... I'm shocked that someone actually liked it. Thank you so much for the review!

Ellie

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I never really thought about them as a couple before, but you really made it work. Pansy reactions, the way she acted around Draco and thought about her past, it all seemed so realistic. You made me feel sorry for her, which is a real accomplishment because it's hard to feel sorry for bullies. Great story!

Author's Response: This was written for my 'twin' on another site. She loves writing femmeslash, so I gave it a try. :D I'm glad it turned out well. And I'm really happy you liked Pansy. I had issues making her seem somewhat attractive to Susan while still making her a b*tch. Thanks for the review!

Ellie

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Wow, that was a stunner! I didn't read the summary, so I just went with it.
I liked how Pansy had ended up, pretty much hitting rock-bottom in Slytherin terms, I'd think. All that had gone wrong, and then POW! The kiss..
Artful and tastefully done.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. You have no idea how surprised I was to find a review on this! :)

Ah, Pansy. She gave me so much grief when I was writing it, trying to make her somewhat compassionate while still being who she is (I don't think I can actually say it in a review :/).

But, yeah, I don't know what it is, but I can't give my characters a (semi) happy ending before giving them at least a little bit of D/A.

I'm glad you liked it, though, and since I am now out of school, I should have a chance to start reading your fanfic again!

This was written for one for my best friend on fanfiction. We're almost like twins. :) She loves writing slash, so I thought I'd give it a shot. (And now for a challenge I'm writing an Alphius). So ... I'm really glad you liked it. :)

(I'll stop rambling now) Thanks again for the review!

Ellie

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