I think you wrote this very well; I kept oscillating back and forth between thinking the narrator was Ron, or was it Harry? It was difficult to tell, and that was the greatest part of the story! It's sad, truly... poor Ron, but I'm personally a fan of Harry and Hermione so perhaps it's not as sad as it would have been if Harry had been the narrator after all. Report Review
Wow!! LOL No wonder why it seemed so familiar, I was remembering the music video for Wedding Dress throughout the whole story! Great job! Love the twist in the ending! Report Review
Amazing. Beautiful. Inspirational. Any positive adjective, you name it. That's what your story is!!! I loved it! Every word was so well written and perfect. I love how you wrote it from Ron's point of view! Your story was great. Never stop writing! :) Report Review
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