First of all...I LOVE the title. It is what drew me in to read your story! =)
I really like the Neville/Luna pairing. I think that they are just to darn cute together. I thought you did a great job characterizing them. I have seen a lot of stories where they just aren't done right, but you have done a wonderful job.
I also liked the way that you described not only the surroundings, but their emotions and feelings towards a certain plant. ;) I thought that the story flowed well and the pace was nice and didn't drag.
Keep up the awesome writing!! =)
Recenseo 2012Author's Response: Heysies~Yay! I love the title, too! I'm so glad you luuurrvvee it! *squeals and hugs you* haha! Aww, thanks so much! You are a wonderful, person. Really. Do you know that? No? Now you dooo! Thank you for the great review. You don't know how much I'm floating right now. :))
AW! from the craziness of luna to the awkwardness of neville you captured the characters of neville and luna perfectly. take the characterization and add a little teen crush and you've got a great story. this could almost be a companion piece would love to see more neville/luna from you.Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's my first time to write them (obviously) and I'm happy you think it's great! I'll try to write more neville/luna. They're fun to write!! :) Report Review
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