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Review #1, by Lily Alexandra Evans

Those Ten Things

9th October 2012:

I love your story! I really like the ending part with Lily. That was sweet.

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Review #2, by hp lover

Those Ten Things

10th August 2012:

Wow you just combined one of my favourite movies and my favourite book series. Well done I say well done. I love it especially the last 4 lines they were beautiful 10/10.

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Review #3, by chucks

Those Ten Things

30th June 2012:

This is very cute! :) I've always loved the last part of the poem from the movie. I wish we got to see the 10 things she hated about him! :) IT would have been even cuter! Anyways, good job! :D

Author's Response: Just for you, here is Lily's hate poem (only slightly different from the original):

I hate the way you prank on me, and the way you muss your hair
I hate the way you ride your broom, I hate it when you stare

I hate your big dumb glasses, and the way you read my mind
I hate you so much that it makes me sick, It even makes me rhyme

I hate the way you're sometimes right.
I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh, Even worse when you make me cry.

I hate it when you're not around, and the fact that you didn't floo call
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you, Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.

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Review #4, by Opalpixiechick

Those Ten Things

26th June 2012:

Awww. I love this. :) That was so cute. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. It means much. Happy half-way-to-Christmas!

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