I love your story! I really like the ending part with Lily. That was sweet. Report Review
Wow you just combined one of my favourite movies and my favourite book series. Well done I say well done. I love it especially the last 4 lines they were beautiful 10/10. Report Review
This is very cute! :) I've always loved the last part of the poem from the movie. I wish we got to see the 10 things she hated about him! :) IT would have been even cuter! Anyways, good job! :DAuthor's Response: Just for you, here is Lily's hate poem (only slightly different from the original):
I hate the way you prank on me, and the way you muss your hair
I hate the way you ride your broom, I hate it when you stare
I hate your big dumb glasses, and the way you read my mind
I hate you so much that it makes me sick, It even makes me rhyme
I hate the way you're sometimes right.
I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh, Even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it when you're not around, and the fact that you didn't floo call
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you, Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all. Report Review
Awww. I love this. :) That was so cute. :)Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. It means much. Happy half-way-to-Christmas! Report Review
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