Wow I really loved this - it's so different and unusual and just.. so beautiful (especially at the start) yet so heartbreakingly sad as well. I have no idea how much love a mother feels for her baby/child since I'm still young xD but the way you wrote this conveyed those feelings through quite powerfully. I was so surprised to hear about Ron and what happened in the war, and it just makes me so sad..
I thought it was a bit weird that babies reciprocate the mother's feelings but I guess it had to happen to fit with the plot. But the end and how heartbroken she is.. the feelings were just really well written. A really interesting and nicely written story :)Author's Response: Well... to be honest neither do I xD I have no idea how it feels, I took a guess though!
Yeah, an AU world, I needed it to be so that she was all alone and the only thing she had was her new daughter, and she died.
Its actually a true fact. Children get scared when the mother is scared etc. etc. That's why pregnant women are not meant to be under any duress during pregancy.
Once again, thank you for the review and your kind words, if you want, you can read my other stories, although they are Draco/Hermione, because they are my OTP.
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