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Review #1, by Ron 4 Hermione Kidnapping

5th June 2012:
Hey there, this is a good story- it's different but interesting.
There are a few things that could be made to improve it:
- It's a little on the short side. To make it longer maybe you could be a little bit more descriptive. It would make it more detailed and it would make it more interesting for the reader.
- The layout. If you could improve the layout of chapters 3 and 4 then it would make it easier to read.
Overall it's a good story (9/10) and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

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