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Review #1, by maskedmuggle When All That's Lost Remains

4th June 2012:
This was a really unusual and interesting snapshot of the Blacks during Regulus' funeral, especially with the Sirius/Bellatrix bit. I thought you managed to portray Sirius and Bellatrix really well for the purposes of this story, and their actions were kinda crazy but still kind of believable. The last dialogue Sirius says is perfect in regards to his character.

Perhaps you might like to consider adding in some more descriptions of the scenery, more thoughts and more emotions? I found it quite short and maybe lacking a little bit in detail, but nevertheless, an intriguing fic :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought they were
in-character. Sirius is one of my favorite characters and I'd really hate to mess him up.

I really appreciate the critique. I often have trouble with writing lengthy fic--I get lazy about my details. It's probably my biggest flaw as a writer.


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Review #2, by me When All That's Lost Remains

23rd May 2012:
they are cousins...thats incest...its kinda gross...its good except for the incest part

Author's Response: I'm glad that you thought it was good regardless! I don't approve of incest, but I feel that in this particular fic, it was the motivating factor. It's why Bellatrix didn't want anybody to see them (other than the fact that Sirius was disowned).

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