Ok, I LOVED it until I got to the end. The ending was like he ending of a chapter f a story, not one shot!!! What he bleep??? I want more please! (This IS a positive review for your story, I'm just frustrated by the ending.) Report Review
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!? please write more Report Review
You've got an interesting story here, but I should tell you that when Rose is telling Albus to be quiet, it says she "covered his hand with her mouth." It's an easily overlooked mistake, but I must have laughed for 5 minutes straight visualizing it. I really did enjoy the story, though, and a sequel would not be unappreciated. :) Report Review
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