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Review #1, by CUT_DMalfoy The baby is born

15th August 2012:
Nicolle is really cute! Its really sad, how Nicolle got separated from her parents, but it would be for the better good, seeing that her parents are evil :P I can't wait to see Bellatrix's reaction when she finds out her precious daughter is taken away :) Good luck with this story!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I'll be posting the next chapter soon, so watch out for it.
XOXO, Nikki


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Review #2, by 11whimsy The baby is born

8th August 2012:
HI!!! This is a really cool first chapter, it's a great idea. I'm excited to see what will happen. The only suggestion I would have is to put more paragraph breaks in between dialogue passages. besides that... I think it's great. good work :)

Author's Response: Awn, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, I'm updating as soon as I can. I'll work on the dialogues, thanks for the suggestion.
XOXO, Nikki


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