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Review #1, by LovingMarauder Chapter One

14th May 2012:
For first chapter-it isn't bad.It's amazing!I really like the way you write and idea is really great.:)

I like how you presented what Cedar can do,if she want.(Howler part) :)

What you could do,is to describe characters little bit better.:)

Keep writing,updating and don't give up.;)

~LovingMarauder

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

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