It was a bit too fast and like puppy-love but I liked it :)Author's Response: aw, thank you, i was unsure of how long or short to make it, as it was a one shot but thank you :) Report Review
I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story! I was a little worried about how I would feel about reading Draco/Luna, but I figured I would give it a try and I really found it intriguing.
I really enjoyed the descriptions that you provided. It helped me (no pun intended) picture the story really well. I also thought that you characterized them both in a great way. Luna has that oddness there about her and Draco has that longing to what to be loved even if it is by Luna.
One thing that I found difficult about reading your story was that it had a lot of uncapitalized words. It is one of those things that just jumps out at you as you read it. The flow wasn't messy, but it did slow the pace down a little bit. This is just something to keep in mind. That being said I still really enjoyed the story.
Keep up the great writing! =)
Recenseo 2012Author's Response: Aww, thank you for the review, I've been reading a lot of fan-fiction and thought that i should maybe give it a go, its the first thing I've wrote and Im unsure if i will continue writing but thanks :) Report Review
Oh my freakin nargles. I don't think I can put my thoughts into words right now. I just love this story so much! This was so beautiful!!! The ending was awesome. And so was the beginning. And middle. 100/10 if I could!
XD DrunaforeverAuthor's Response: aw, thanks very much, this is actually the first time i've wrote a fanfic so i was scared of the reaction but thanks for such a great review, it means a lot :) Report Review
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