Whaa I love your story! You had me chaking a few times before my computer because Olivia is so funny. Keep writing I'll be very excited to see the rest. :D Report Review
hey! i love your story. i haven't read ur other ones but im sure they are really good. i also wanted to inform u that i saw that someone COPIED two of your stories (running and tainted red) and posted thm as their own on fanfictiondotnet with the same titles. but only changed tainted red to tainted crimson . .so i just wanted to inform this to u and to let u know tht i love ur storyand the idea of it and plz update soon. :) Report Review
Ten amazing things about your story
1. It is original
2. I love Rose, she is dramatic and amazing (like me, obviously)
3. The fact that Al likes her and doesn't admit it is adorable
4. I think you should develope her sister and maybe have a vision about her (for example she sees her sister looking for her?)
5. I think the Rose/Scorpius is really well presented
6. You made me hate Morgan (the slut)
7. It flows really well (could you leave it on a cliffhanger)
8. I like James' protectiveness and the humor in it (siriusly)
9. The chapter titles are good
10. Please add another chapter soon
Trust, you deserve an award for amazing OC
~Macy x Report Review
Really good job on this chapter!!!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I am glad that you liked the chapter! Report Review
please write more, i thought this was FANTASTIC and BRILLIANT i think you should include more visionsAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I am glad that you like my story! I will try to include more visions.
Thanks again for reviewing!
Becky Report Review
It has been a while since I've been on this site. And your story is one of first I read since then. And I think your story is great! And I look forward to the rest.Author's Response: Awww! Thanks so much! I am glad that you like my story! I will try to update soon! Report Review
Please write an other chapter really really quickly! I am kind of hooked on this one right now and I want to know what happens next.
How could Olivia have missed her sister being at Hogwarts, really?
I liked how James was all overprotective of Rose, typically him. It's in his blood I guess. I wouldn't have put it passed Rose to punch him right back if she had been more involved with Scorpius by that time.
I do really hope Olivia gets to talk to her sister normally, catch up on what she missed over the past years... It would be what she deserves.
Anyways, keep on writing you're doing great!
xAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing again!
I will say that Olivia did miss her sister, but there is a reason for it.
James is far to overprotective. Rose is just plain crazy though.
I will say that Olivia MIGHT talk to her sister in the next chapter.
Thanks again for reviewing.
Becky Report Review
I really like to see more interation between Olivia and Scorpius, maybe they can be friends or something like that... I don't know, but what you wrote till now with them was cute.
I like how fire-y Rose is. She's totally bonkers if you ask me, but I like that a lot.
I like this story a lot... I have to keep reading now!
xAuthor's Response: I can say that I am planning for more Olivia and Scorpius interaction because you asked for it. Rose is a crazy child (I worry about her).
Thanks for reviewing!
Becky Report Review
I'm so intigued. Her sister was at Hogwarts all this time and she never noticed?
I am so, so, so intrigued, her sister is at Hogwarts! Oh my god!!
I did not see that coming.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Soph xxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! It is crazy that her sister is in Hogwarts, right? I am glad that my story is intriguing.
Thanks again for reviewing!
Becky Report Review
I'm definitely a fan of your writing style and the originality of your plot. Also, whenever I'm texting about someone I dislike, I use quotation marks around his or her alleged "name" (and air quotes when I'm talking about them IRL, obvs), so I'm pretty obsessed with the fact that you did that here with "Morgan"...Keep it up :) xxB Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and it is great to hear that you like my story! The next chapter is waiting for validation. Report Review
I love this story, I laughed so much. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! It is always great to hear that people like my story! The next chapter is waiting for validation. Report Review
Love the story,waiting for another chapter(:Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and I am glad to hear that you like the story! The next chapter is waiting for validation. Report Review
:o I love your story
I love how you write it and it's so funny!
Can't wait for the next chapter...
:( CLIFFHANGER!!! hahahAuthor's Response: Awww thanks! I am glad that you like my story! And cliffhanger! I had to, I'm sorry, but I had to. Anyway thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
"With who, the giant squid? That is the only living creature that will ever want to take you out on a date," - Even though Morgan seems like a cow, she made me laugh :D
I'm thinking Al was the one who's been telling James all about Olivia, maybe there's romance in the air.
I think it'll be interesting to see what Olivia does when her sister appears.
Soph xx :DAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes Morgan has her funny lines but they are all mean.
Al might have... I will leave it at that...
And sister will equal drama!
Thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
Yay fast update :) This chapter was really funny, well done :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! Hopefully I will be able to update quickly again! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I just saw my sisters hair? I don't get it...?Author's Response: Olivia saw her sister and she knew it was her sister because of her hair. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
LOVE IT! please update soonAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I will update soon! Report Review
This is really good and there just aren't enough seer stories. I really like the plot and I'm curious as to what she did and where she lived when she was on the run.
I Love Olivia's personality and Rose's because she's so different to other Rose's I've read.
My fav quotes have to be -
"Am I just going to meet every famous personís offspring today?" - I love it! :D
"He was a great guy, well until he tried to mug me" - Lol, It made laugh :D
So far I'm loving Rose, mainly because she's so loud and totally insane!
Deffo adding this to my favourites.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Soph xAuthor's Response: I am glad you like the plot line and the characters! I will add more about her background soon because you wanted to know.
Ah the quotes... It is great to know people like the jokes I put in (mostly with sarcasm involved)
Thanks for reviewing (this story and the other two!) Report Review
Is it possible to fall in love with a story? Because I think I have... :D
Added to favourites! Please update asap :)Author's Response: Awww this is so sweet! Thanks so much! And I will update as soon as I can! Report Review
Favourite character - Olivia!!
More of Al !!
Olivia's comments about Rose :P
I like your story so far and the concept of her being the last seer. Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Also thank you for your feedback I will definitely take it into account for writing the next chapter as well as future chapters. Report Review
Delightful story. I love it! Though, I was thinking you could, erm, perhaps, make Rose a little less psychotic? Just tone down a little of that constant shouting and all that.
I mean, I know that's one of the "quirks" that makes Rose Rose in this story, but I think it's a little strange that she is yelling all the time. Maybe you could make her become more normal and serious in appropriate times. Like, maybe she acts crazy most of the time but when it comes for a time to be serious and stop shouting, she'll do that.
Okay, anyway, I love the other characters and my favourite has to be Olivia. Of course. Main character and all that. But she really has the best personality - sarcastic. What's not to love?
I definitely want to see more Albus in the story! Sophie seems like a nice person too, so I think I'll be looking forward to reading her as a good friend of Olivia. Lastly, you definitely have to introduce more of the Wotter gang e.g. Fred, James. They are one interesting bunch.
Okay, that's it! Please continue writing and sharing this wonderful story with the world!Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Yes Rose is super crazy and I will definitely take your advice because she really needs to calm down some.
Olivia's sarcasm- not much you can say about it but I am glad you love it.
More Albus- check! Is that more Sophie as well? I will take that as a yes because she will be in the story more...
I know! Where are all the other Wotters (well I know but they have not showed up in the story yet...). They will show up soon!
Thanks again for the review! Report Review
That blurry vision about Scorpius and Al talking? They were totally bonding over their girl-hunting. You know, giving tips to get in contact with Rose and Olivia. I'm sure of it.
'It's not like she's a fugitive.' Genius. Yeah she is. And while it's very nice of Al to say 'She'll tell us when she's ready', I don't entirely buy it: he has to be unbelievably curious too, right?! Oh sweet Albie.
By the way, even if she doesn't want to tell them, they'll find her with black eyes sometime...Author's Response: Scorpius and Al could be talking about that or they could be talking about something else...
Al is curious but not as much as Rose. Also Al is kind of blinded from being curious that much because he does have a crush on Olivia.
We will see if they find out...
I do not want to give too much away, so I will leave it at that. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
This story is so original! I've never read anything like it but I love it. It's so well-written and I love all the characters, especially Rose with the way she's similar to her parents but you don't try to make her a carbon copy of Ron and Hermione.
And Albus. That boy is swoon-worthy just from the little vision Olivia just had. I can't wait for more of Al and the rest of them. Update soon! I'm addicted to this story now :)
10/10Author's Response: Thanks! This is such a sweet review! I have not started the next chapter :( but I will soon hopefully. I am playing to work on it tomorrow.
Anyway thanks for the review and i appreciate you taking the time to write it. Report Review
love love love this story please update it soon otherwise i will have nothing to read! :'( thanks!!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the sweet review! I think i will only be alternating this story with my other story Disobedience (you should check that one out!) so the updates should come much faster! Report Review
DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY PLEASE. Thank you.
It's a marvellous idea, a running seer. There aren't enough stories about seers. And, as Albus so rightly pointed out, 'I like this girl!'
When will the next chapter be?Author's Response: I promise I am not abandoning this story! I have just gotten so distracted and then I started freaking out because my college applications are due sooner than I am prepared for. But I will not abandon this story!
I am about halfway done with the next chapter, I know the wait has been terrible so I am trying to make the chapter absolutely perfect. Plus I got distracted by the new story I am writing, you should check it out, it is called Perfect. But please forgive me, hopefully if everything goes well I will have it out in about a week.
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