Oh it was beautiful!
I started bawling when George said he died laughing. I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it. Report Review
why did you make George die instead of FredAuthor's Response: I didn't?? If you're referring to the statement "George was gone" it wasn't meant literally it was meant figuratively :) Report Review
So sad... :( but brilliantAuthor's Response: Thanks :) I hope I got the right atmosphere for it - Fred's death was definitely one of the worst for me :( Report Review
That was beautiful. I loved your version. You write well. I cried thru the whole thing. I still 'hate' JK for killing off Fred but she is the authur.
I hope to see more of your writing.
There are a couple errors. You switched Fred and Goerge at times. But other than that, it's a lovely piece.
PatriciaAuthor's Response: Awww thank you :D I'm really enjoying writing this one -- I'll go through it and change all the Fred and Georges :) And same I hate that Fred had to die! :'( Thanks for letting me know :D When I was writing it I would not be thinking and I would write Fred instead just out of habit and most of them I changed but I must have left a few :) Thanks for reviewing! :D Report Review
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