Aw, I feel so sad for Albus! His relationship was so sweet and it's so horrible that he had to lose the woman he loved :(
I love how you write Grant, though! And I loved the conversation with Rose. Keep it up :D
I can't wait to read more of on of your stories!Author's Response: I know, I kind of hate myself for writing it! I don't know what I am going to do when it gets really sadâ¦I will probably end up crying. Gosh, I am just such a mess.
Thank you, I am in love with Grant. Why can't he be real? I am glad you like him!
Thank you so much for reviewing again, and the last chapter of Take These Broken Wings is in the queue and I have a new story that I am working on, so maybe it will be up soonâ¦But thank you for your reviews so much. They are really meaningful to me, and they help me a lot! Thank you!
~AlwaysSev Report Review
Another amazing one! Gosh I love your writing! I think I may have to favorite author you ;) But honestly! Spectacular job, I love this so far! I hope you find time to update this and all your other awesome stories soon :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the amazing reviews, sorry it took me so long to reply to them! They really mean a lot to me. And thank you for favorite author-ing me! You are the best! I am going to update one of them later today, I had a whole schedule written up, just have to find it :) Thanks so much for everything, it really means a lot to me just reading your reviews. I can't thank you enough! I hope you keep reading, because you are really the best!! Report Review
Another great chapter! I love how you write the Weasley-Potter family, it's a lot of fun/crazy chaos. Brilliant job! :)Author's Response: Haha I am glad you like the craziness. My own family is pretty big, but definitely not that big! It is sometimes hard to write so I had to draw this crazy family tree... But it is definitely fun to write! Thanks again! Report Review
This is such a great idea! I love the idea behind the plot and the song and just everything, really! Amazing job so far, I can't wait to read the next chapter :)Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it. It was one of those things where I was listening to the song, and thought of what a great story it would make! I love writing this story because I pretty much have my plot all planned out, it is just filling in the details. And Mayday Parade is amazing, if you haven't heard the song, you should definitely check it out :) But I am glad that you like it! Thanks again for reviewing Report Review
I just have to get this out there: I absolutely LOVE mayday parade. And this song your story is based on. But unfortunately, now I have a good idea of what's going to happen next :(
Anyways, really nice story so far! And who doesn't love a good love story? It does make me feel very sad for Al though :( Poor him.
Looking forward to more!
-Bella :)Author's Response: Thank you very much for this lovely review! I really appreciate it! Mayday Parade is amazing, I saw them in concert and fell in love with this song. I love how it tells a story, which is why I decided to write this. I felt a little morbid writing it at first, but it is a great love story if you look past all the bad stuff :( Thank you so much for reviewing again, and I hope that you continue to read! :) Report Review
Hi, it's MrsPotter from TDA. A review as promised :)
This was really good. I love the stroy line and the way you wrote the charcters was brilliant! It was written really well and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work :) 10/10
PS Thanks for the review on Love Story :) XxAuthor's Response: Hey! Thanks so much! You are too nice! I really appriciate this, since it is the first review! It definitely lets me know that I should continue along the same path :) Thanks again, and I am so glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
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