hahaha this was so funny! You portrayed Fred and George so good! I like that you did it from a point of view from a muggle, I've never read HPFF story like this before. Please put up more chapters, I really like it!!!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Ahh my first review of my first chapter of my first story! haha this is so exciting to me! I'm very glad you liked it, I know it's kind of hard to get into, but if you just keep reading this story, it gets really good :)
I tried to write Fred and George in a way that the brilliant J.K. Rowling would, but even to my best of ability, I cannot capture them in the same brilliance that J.K. Rowling has. But that means a lot to me that'd you say that!
And don't you worry, I have most of the story already written out, it's just a matter of posting them online.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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