That was amazing!! I love the nicknames 'Beluga?' So not the thing to say to a pregnant woman haha. You really should write more. Because this is freaking amazing. I love Sirius in this. That's just plain genius. Haha. Okay I'll stop rambling so you can write more. ^_^
10/10 for sure!
KatieAuthor's Response: Awh, thanks so much! This one shot made me love writing maruaders! Keep a look out for more!
Thanks so much! :D Report Review
I really liked that! It was a great combination of funny and sweet and it's difficult to say anything bad about a story that ends on such a lovely note. :) I can only imagine the fight they had immediately after this, haha.
Lily's insult were awesome! I don't know how you came up with all of them, but they were incredibly original and hilarious. So many strange combinations... :)
The whole thing with Lily's nickname was funny, although you have to wonder why Sirius thought it would be a good idea to say that out loud to a pregnant woman. He can be a bit clueless sometimes, it seems.
And yes, they were so immature, but James and Lily are at their best when they're bickering like teenagers. Which they are. It creates all the best moments for them. This really was a great little one-shot! You did a remarkable job for your first James/Lily story ever. I hope you keep writing more of them! 10/10Author's Response: Awh, thanks doll! This review made me smile (:
I love writing humorour love stories Lol. Knowing James and Lily it was probably a rather large fight...hmmm...haha!
Lily's insults were my favorite part to write out of the story! I loved them, they were a little crazy, but I thought they were amusing too.
Sirius was being the epiphany of clueless in this! Haha Saying that to a PREGNANT LILY was not a wise idea...Lol :)
I agree with you, that's my favorite way to see them written, as bickering teens.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, I enjoyed writing it! :D Report Review
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