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Review #1, by married to black Perfect Moments

27th May 2012:
I'm intrigued! I really like this story. It has a lot of potential and involves a Weasley brother that I have always been interested in! I can't wait to read the next chapter. The only nitpick I have is that the large spaces between the paragraphs need to be fixed. It's a bit of an eyesore and shouldn't be that spaced out. I don't know if it's your doing or the sites, but I'd fix that up! Other than that, I really love this story so far. Can't wait to see where it goes. I hope the chapters become a bit longer in the next couple of chapters - I want to read more! I'm getting hooked, hehehe :)

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Review #2, by luvdobby26 Perfect Moments

17th May 2012:
Hi, Alanna, a review as promised. :)
This was really good, I really enjoyed it. It so well written and I already love the characters. Although, I think it is a bit short, maybe a bit more discriptions would be good but other that that it was really good.
I know you were worried that your spacing had gone all weird but it wasn't that bad, it was still easy to read.
Great chapter and I can't wait till the next one :) Chapter two of 'Summer' is up if you'd like to have a look, and if you do please leave a review, I would love to know what you think.Also chapter 2 of 'Love Story' is in the queue, should be out in a few days :) xx 10/10

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Review #3, by luvdobby26 Prologue

12th May 2012:
Hey Alanna, it Eilidh (MrsPotter) from TDA.
This was really AMAZING!!! It was so well written and so sad. I wonder who the people were inside the house and who that little girl is. Is she the girl in the summery?
Anyway, a great start to a great story, well done!! :) 10/10 xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible, that might help to explain a few things. ;) And maybe.*shifty eyes* but no spoilers.

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