This was really good. It must have felt like there was someone missing when George married, because Fred would have been best man if he was alive. I really liked Hermione and George's interaction and how she became a confidant. Good that George and Angelina were able to talk through it.Author's Response: I'm glad you thought that. Everything that you've said is something I wanted to convey, so I hope that I succeeded. =] Report Review
I thought that this was a really great story about the George's wedding. It's interesting that you chose Hermione not Ginny to help George. I found the cufflinks really sweet. Overall this is a really well written story and I really enjoyed it.
P.S. Results for the Wedding Challenge should hopefully be posted within the day.Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing. I hope you liked it, and that I did the couple justice. =] Report Review
Poor George. He always makes me so sad without Fred. This story was written beautifully. The mutual pain he and Angelina felt over losing Fred seemed so real and down to Earth.
I loved that you wrote Hermione such an important role in this. It's always interesting to see her interact with George after Fred's death since she had so little to say to them before. The way he felt towards her on the day of the wedding was very sweet since she knew nothing about it. It seemed like one of those things he could bring up in ten or twenty years and she'd be utterly shocked she had such a major impact on him.
Everything about this one-shot was just so lovely. I enjoyed reading it immensely, even if I did tear up a bit towards the end. You wrote it wonderfully!Author's Response: Oh my goodness. This is one of the nicest reviews anyone has ever left me. I am ever so grateful!
I am so glad that you considered it to be realistic, especially the interaction between George and Hermione. I was a little unsure about whether it would be her who would talk with George or whether it ought to be Ginny, but I went with it, so I'm so happy that you liked it.
Apologies that you were tearing up towards the end. It was a little sad wasn't it? I'm very thankful for the review, it really does mean so much to get feedback on my story. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. =] Report Review
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