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Review #1, by Vizzy Weasley/Rosie Chapter 2

13th August 2012:
Once again - that was bloody brilliant!! Totally awesome! Write more please!

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Review #2, by Vizzy Weasley/Rosie First Sight

13th August 2012:
OMG could u please write more chapters?! Pleeease! You have a lot of skill when it comes to writing i can see, so please continue!
~Vizzy/Rosie
(hehe make sure to include some awkward moments please!! Teehee)

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Review #3, by HermioneNerd203 First Sight

28th June 2012:
Hmmm interesting! I love the idea and the first chapter really leaves me with a million questions =)

Only thing I don't like is I noticed quite a few grammatical and spelling issues. A great idea for that is getting a beta (or editor) to read through your story before posting. There might be an HPFF forum topic about that but I'm not sure.

I can't wait to read more and keep writing!!!


~Abi 9/10

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