It's too reminiscent of my own life, and maybe that's why I love it. I definitely want to read more about these two! A sequel would be amazing. Report Review
Oh, that was amazing! Loved it so much, it was beautiful. I'm not graduating, not yet but one of my best friends is leaving; she's moving far. It's going to be horrible, so thank you for a story that shows it will be aleight.Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your review. This may become a short story, it depends. Report Review
That was really sad, but really cute at the same time! I wouldn't mind seeing it turn into a short story or whatever, I'd read it! Good job on this one!Author's Response: Why, thank you! :) I still haven't decided, but we'll see about it getting longer. Report Review
I really loved this! You did a great job!
I really enjoyed the descriptions of the characters, their emotions, and the way that you used imagery. I thought it suited the story quite well. It provided a wonderful picture in my mind as I read through it. It flowed well and the pace was great.
I also really liked the way that you characterized James and Arielle. It was quite a sad story mostly because people can relate to it in some ways, but I thought that you did it well.
Keep up the awesome writing! =)
Recenseo 2012Author's Response: Thanks! I might post a sequel or make it into a short story or something, so keep a lookout! :) Report Review
Aww I thought this was so beautiful ♥ The way you wrote this made this such an exquisite story. I really loved the gorgeous setting you had, but most of all, the plot with the graduation and James leaving for auror training, and the relationship between Arielle and James. I really loved how romantic you managed to make this through their actions, dialogue... and the promise ring was such a sweet idea. Your writing is wonderful - you conveyed such strong emotions and feelings in this. I felt so sad at the start for Arielle's heartbroken emotions, and throughout I could really feel the love Arielle had for James.
It was just such a beautiful story - I really enjoyed reading this - loved it :) Really well written!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I might post a sequel or make it into a short story or something, I'll keep my page posted! Report Review
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