Aaahh Bones ...*bliss*
I love Zacckaroni and Hodge Podge!
And I love this chapter! :D
Though still a little short, but anyway..please update soon :) Report Review
-.- I hate cliffhangers.ANYWAYS. the story is good but the chapter are really short, other then that good jobAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review! I am making the next chapter longer. :) Report Review
Hi! Excellent chapter Ariana :) I love the name macey, but just wondering, how exactly is it pronounced? is it may-cee or mass-ee? if its pronounced may-cee I love the name even more, although i think my opinion is a tad biased considering my name is maysie pronounced may-cee :)
also your soccer reference should probablly be called football due to the fact that they're in england, unless calling it soccer was your intent(?), which in that case i apologize.
oh yeah also i love how you have wood twins! not many people do so i find it interesting, these two should prove entertaining! :)
In general well done! This story seems like one which I will absolutly love!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love thoughtful reviews. I will fix the football thing thanks and it is pronounced may-cee. I am putting the next chapter in the queue now! :) The Wood twin should prove to be very interesting. Thanks again!
~Ariana Report Review
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