Hello there! So I'm finally here to review your entry! I read it awhile back to finalize the challenge winners and such, but I've only now had the chance to leave you a review!
I absolutely loved this piece. I thought it was brilliant. So unique and extremely touching. You rarely see a story involving Hermione and her mother, and I loved that touch of originality. It's out there and something that I've never seen done before. I love that.
This was beautifully written. The flow was just wonderful and went together seamlessly.
I also often think of Hermione and when she wiped the memory of her parents. I always wonder how it was after the war, and I love your sense of hope there at the end of the story.
Your use of the quote was absolutely perfect. I loved it so much!
All in all, great piece! I loved it so much. Thank you so much for participating. You'll have to check in the Hall of Fame section in a few hours. I'll be posting the results soon. Well done! Report Review
Oh this is such a sad oneshot with the idea that she has to take away her parents memory the next day! I love the look into her life and her relationship with her mother, it was just really sweet! I felt so bad during the nightmare of her being stuck and unable to help her mother at all no matter how much she tried so it was nice to have the reassurance that her mother is still alive by coming into her room and calming her after the nightmare. I think you did a great job with your challenge and the best of luck to you! I really felt this oneshot was well done and it had a nice flow to it as well fromt he nightmare to her waking up. Great Job!
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