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Review #1, by Celtic_Dreamer7 Happy Birthday?

18th May 2012:
"We quickly ate dinner and the giant Snitch cake, the quiet filled with tension." - This sentence confused me. It took a few readings to understand it. I really like how the spacing is fixed in this chapter compared to your first. I like how you have added extra details like fixing his glasses and such. It gives more depth to the characters.

I hope you continue to update. I would love to read what happens at the school while the trio are off searching for horcruxes.

Great so far. Just wish it had been a bit longer, lol.

~Celtic~

Author's Response: Hello again, Celtic!
I'm glad the spacing is fixed, too. It really bugged me before. And adding depth... well that's my job as the story goes on, isn't it? Lol. I will definitely continue to update, considering I have up to chapter six written. And the next chapters will be longer, I've been working on making them so and not pacing everything too fast. That's my problem... I'm slightly impatient. But not to fear!
-Anne


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Review #2, by jakesintown Happy Birthday?

17th May 2012:
I SPEAK THE TRUTH AND NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH
and, in truth,
I SENSE A DUMBLEDORE'S ARMY COMING
maybe that's just me
but ya never know
another great chapter my friend!
-emily

Author's Response: you never do know... hehehe.
but thanks for another review, Emily! I'll check your story RIGHT NOW to see if there's an update. And I'm uploading chapter three RIGHT NOW. AAANNND I have up to half of chapter six written, so... yay!
-Anne


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Review #3, by jakesintown Arriving at the Burrow

13th May 2012:
omg i cannot get over this line
"Bingo, bango, bongo, they're married and have a little bundle of joy (moi)."
that literally made my day
omg dying
this was great!
i'm gonna go favorite it now so i can be ready for chapter two
hope you continue to read my story too! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I personally liked that line, too... and Chapter Two joined the queue a day or two ago, so HOPEFULLY IT WON'T BE REJECTED AGAIN... (Sodding space issues.) I'll favorite yours, too! I can't wait for your chapter two because I think that your plotline is SUPER original and I'm just like... I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE JAMES POTTER COMMUNICATE ME THROUGH MY DREAMS... haha. Thanks, though! And I definitely will continue to read your story! :)
-Anne


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Review #4, by Zebratical Schmidt Arriving at the Burrow

12th May 2012:
This is a brilliant story! I love it so far. It seems to be going in a great direction. I love the idea of adding a made up character into the story. Can't wait for more :D. -Zebra

Author's Response: Thanks, Zebra! I'm so glad you think it's brilliant! Chapter Two should hopefully be up soon... I just sent it in to be re-validated (it got rejected because of those sodding spacing issues). But thank you sooo much! Reviews mean the world to me - I know I'm a sappy person, but they do... haha. Thanks again!
-Anne


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Review #5, by Celtic_Dreamer7 Arriving at the Burrow

4th May 2012:
That was a great beginning. I love how you've woven your OC into the original story. Just a few suggestions, though. The beginning before she leaves her house felt a bit rushed and there could be more details added here and there for more flavor but it didn't take away from the story that much. I'm sure you know but the spacing made it a tad difficult to read. Congrats on your first HP fanfic! Again, a great beginning and I hope you continue with Desdemona's quest at Hogwarts.

~Celtic~

Recenseo - 2012

Author's Response: Hey Celtic!
I just want you to know that your review made me soo excited - I know I'm lame, but it did. I know, the spacing was so awkward - I had originally written it directly on here, but then it deleted, and I didn't remember exactly what I wrote, but I'm pretty sure the scenes in her house were better. I'll definitely continue, because I really like her character, and I had thought of this and how it would be interesting writing from her perspective when I know the true story and she doesn't - do you get what I'm saying? Sorry this review is so long. About the spacing thing again, it said it needed to be double-spaced and I put this on at like eleven, and it said "for better readability it needs to be double spaced" and I'm just like, okay then. Again, sorry this review is so long, but I'm just so glad I got one! Hehe. If you have any other fellow Harry Potter lovers, don't hesitate to reccommend! Sorry, I know I sound like an idiot. Well then, I'll stop rambling. Writer's problem, I guess. Thanks for the feedback!
-Anne


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