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Review #1, by Celtic_Dreamer7 Beginnings

3rd May 2012:
That was a very good start to what I hope is a continued story. I love Tom Riddle fics! I can't wait to read more of this. I did see one error I wanted to point out but it wasn't major: "You couldn't see anything of what he was thinking, couldn't even see if you liked you or if he hated you." Should it be "if HE liked you"? Again, nothing major but thought I would point it out.

The ending seemed a bit rushed with him wanting to be with her but your description of his character and his escapades really explained it well and made it more clear.

Great job and I can't wait to read more.

~Celtic~

Recenseo - 2012

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