THIS STORY IS ACTUALLY AWESOME. i havent been able to find a good marauders fic in ages, so i thank thee :D
great beginning by the way, lily and sirius? hmm...things seem to be very serious.
MUHAHAHA. I LOVE THAT PUN.
great story :D

Author's Response: Oh, thank you, dearest :)

Hahaha, I love that pun as well xD It just never gets old.

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*Maria

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next chapter please :) loving it!

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I love it! Do keep writing : D i kind of ship Lily and Sirius, because you make them seem so cute together! LOVE THIS STORY!

-LoVe_Sirius

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Loving the story! When does Muffin come back?! Please keep writing. :)

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Please continue!! I notice that you haven't updated this I forever but I'm hoping its not abandoned...

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It is getting better with ever chapter...plzz post soon!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you feel that way :D

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*Maria

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wait wait wait is evans gonna get pregnant??

plz dont

Author's Response: HAHAHA

no.

*Maria

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Hey, it's me AGAIN. Please don't think I'm creepy or anything, but is there any way you can write faster? I'm anxiously awaiting more, what you have so far is great.
P.S. from now on, I'll use the name TomRiddlesDiary when I leave obnoxious comments.

Author's Response: Hahah, I don't think you're creedy at all ^^And I'll try to write faster :p

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Loving Sirius as narrator. Thanks for the read so far.
x

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Hey, I really like this story so far, and I think you do a great job writing from Sirius' point of view. As a guy, what goes through my head is very similar to what goes through his. I'm (not very patiently) awaiting more.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. I'm glad you like it!

YOU'RE A GUY??! Please please please keep on reviewing - I need a guy's point of view on this! I totally feel like I'm messing things up sometimes, just cause I don't really know how a guy's mind works :p

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MOAR! Seriously, I want more. Maybe with some more interaction between Lily and Sirius? Just a suggestion. Maybe even a repeat of the first incident. It would thicken the plot a little and it would be pretty funny.

Author's Response: I will be back with more, but right now I'm pretty occupied with Expecting Otherwise...

And that's a good suggestion, I'll take that into consideration.

I'm so glad you liked it :D

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*Maria

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1LOVE LOVE IT! James is gonna kill him! Oh poor Sirius.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it :D

Yeah, he will -- if he ever finds out!

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*Maria

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Awe, I adore this story!
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Author's Response: That makes me happyyy!

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*Maria

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Still loving it! On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad :D

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*Maria

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I still love it. On to five!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it :D

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Omg, I love it, I can't stop giggling!
His perspective is perfect and not even really cliche even though he's the manwhore Sirius. It's not the cliche manwhore. I love it! On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad I made you laugh :D

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Ahaaahh! I loved it. I'm so glad I've found this one, I've been needing me some Marauder fictions!
Great set-up, by the way! I'm on to chapter two!
Check out my stories!!

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So glad Snape finally made an appearance! I was beginning to worry about him! I think this was a great chapter but far too short. But I always think the chapters are too short! Anyway my only request is more of Muffin. I want to know this girl!

Author's Response: Of course I had to sneak Snape in there! :p

There will be more of Muffin, definitely :)

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I love because I don't have the foggiest idea where this story will go, we've got Lily/Tabitha/Muffin. This is all turning out to be very interesting and I am glad that the other boys are back! I can't wait to see how long Sirius can take the guilt! :D

Author's Response: Hahah, I hope that's a compliment? :p

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Such a great idea. Not like any Sirius/Lily I've ever read, and I don't read a whole lot of those. But this has got me hooked.

Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you like this, and that you find it different :)

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A new chapter! My summer holidays just got a lot less boring =)
And the Marauders are all back together again! yay! So sweet of them to come back early for Padfoot. He is so funny when he is trying not to tell James about him and Lily. I mean really, what is he going to say? Oh by the way Prongs, while you were away I may have kind of had sex with the girl you're in love with but don't bother about it yeah?
Love it!

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Snape make me giggles XD Wonderful chapter as usual!

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This is really good. Keep the jokes coming- the Marauders being around should compliment Sirius' sense of humour. I think you should have more encounters with Snape and Lily to keep up the awkward moments.

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Awesome as always! I love Remus's grandmother!!
And Sirius's interior monologues are so funny ;-)))
Nice job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you find it entertaining :D I love writing Sirius' inner monologues :p

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Oh god this story get's more and more brilliant with each chapter!!! It is now a good way to becoming an Oscar winning fanfiction. I think you have really matured and grown as a writer. These last few chapters are so much better in comparison to the first few. you probably got used to writing from a male point of view and you do that terifficly! I must say I am really really enjoying this story and the way you portray Sirius and all of the three girls. I can't wait to see what will happen for New Years and the fiasco when James get's back to Hogwarts. Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!!!

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