Haha! Brilliant! :D
This has to be 20 characters so I'm writing this.. Report Review
You should write a sequel with all three of them: Harry, Ron & Hermione!
If Hermione was present, it would have been even more funny. Not that it is not funny now.:D Report Review
This is the best one-shot i have ever read. I mean it, you have really captured the friendship between Ron and Harry..Very well written! Report Review
Haha, this was a funny little story. I enjoyed reading it. A different insight into Harry and Ron for sure. The sudden declaration of love for hermione by Ron was hilarious. And the twins, haha, they never do stop pranking. I was wondering if it was a truth potion at first, but it was actually an entirely new (weird) potion.
But anyway, good story. You could improve on your grammar and flow though :)
Slytherin for the cup 2012. Report Review
Great job with this story :D I loved Harry and Ron's bickering. They were so funny! The comments about Hermione and Ginny were awesome too.
And Fred and George created something not meant to embarrass?? :O I don't believe it.
And the couples. they were so cute! I love Ron/Hermione they are always adorable! As are Harry/Ginny, and you made them perfect! with that potion :D True Thoughts in the most entertaining way, yes?
Great story :D
~Sara Report Review
OMGSH! I'm so happy this finally got published! After all this time and so many emails!
I loved it! It was such a cute idea and the couples are so happy, it still seems strange with Fred there but I love it anyways, some things don't have to be canon (: Report Review
you know,, i've never laughed so much since last few hours.. this was sooo funny.. i totally loved Ron and Harry bickering.. i love their friendship.. and yes Fred dies, looks like you were obliviated about it ;)
brilliant story.. 10/10 Report Review
It was awesome..some questions were really funny! Report Review
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