Cute story I would love to have Elodie as a daughter She seems so special Report Review
Yay!!! Longer chapters! Poor Samantha, but especially, poor Lorcan. I'm kind of disappointed that Elodie doesn't like Lorcan. They would make such a cute married couple!
I'm extremely disappointed in Elodie for accepting Lysander's offer. How could she do that?! I thought she thought Lysander was aloof and wayward! Bah.Author's Response: This took me forever to respond to and for that, I am deeply sorry.
As for the story, it was actually Samantha who thought he was aloof and wayward, but she's got a plan. Remember, she might seem airy, but she's not a prodigy for nothing!
And I'm sorry that you're disappointed!
I hope to update very soon! Report Review
aw :( There wasn't as much quirkeness in this one :( I totally understand that you gotta keep the plot moving, but don't forget to give us some more substance concerning the characters development! Can't wait for more :)Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't like it much :( I hope it won't happen again! Report Review
Aw I love the quirkeness of elodie's friends already! Aboslutely LOVE THEM :) Can't wait to learn more about them all!! Update soon pleaseAuthor's Response: Why thank you :) I hope you continue to read! Report Review
Up to scratch? Absolutely spiffing! Positively entertaining! I loved it! But how does Montgomery speak Car and Static? Is he Muggleborn? Is Samantha Emo? As in Emotinal, Miserable, On the dark side? I love the character descriptions.Author's Response: Montgomery is in fact a Muggleborn, I didn't know if anyone would catch that, but seeing as it doesn't matter as much in the future, it hasn't been brought up yet. Samantha... well, she's just gloomy, I wouldn't say emo... Just a very smart girl with a very negative view on life.
And thank you :)
I hope you continue to read. Report Review
Excellent writing, excellent characters, excellent story plot (despite the fact that it remains unclear), and you have also excelled in giving your story the small, nitty-gritty detail that would set it apart from other story formats: the footnotes. Keep up the footnotes, but keep them optional. I have no doubt that your story will prosper, and I am very eager to read your other stories. Keep writing.Author's Response: I'm very happy that you enjoyed the first chapter, the next one should be coming up very, very soon. And if you are reading my other stories, I have to warn you, they are nothing like this one!
Thank you for reading and I hope that you continue to enjoy it! Report Review
Norman and Norma, with their Spuds. That's brilliant.(1.)
Does she still speak to the potato?! I mean, that could be more than slightly worrying. Still. It made me laugh. (2.)
I'm really looking forward to some Lysander. (3.) Which, by the way, I still don't know how to pronounce. (4.) Hell, I didn't even know it was a name until spellcheck changed my name to it. Even then I had to google it. Gah. (5.)
Anyways! I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon! (6.)
1. It's like having a pet rock that gave birth to a pebble, and replacing it every so often with a larger stone, until eventually you're stuck with a mountain on a leash.
2. It was very funny, and I laughed annoyingly loudly.
3. He sounds awfully dimensional. I'm looking forward to some Elodie and Lysander.
4. Is it Lie-zan-dher, or Li-zan-dher?
5. I make that noise a lot.
6. I really liked this, and I'm really impatient. Snort. Author's Response: Thank you for this wonderful comment! And it's Lie-sand-er, I believe. And your pebble to mountain thought process is extremely interesting.. I will update as soon as I possibly can for you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
I'll start by saying you don't have soup for brains;) and this story has started off really well! Elodie interests me because she is just so odd which is great and I love her potato companion, I read the foot notes and they were so funny especially the bit about james eating soap covered bark which is weird but made me laugh all the same :)
Good job!Author's Response: Thank you so very much! (And I'm glad that you don't think my brains are soup, but if they were I'd imagine them being minestrone... just a thought). Anyways, I'm very happy that you enjoyed the story and I hope you continue to be pleased with my writing! Report Review
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