Despite some grammatical and spelling errors and times when the characters are a bit OOC, it's a good story which I am really enjoying reading :)

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this sounds real silly even for Harry.
going into hiding but still going to lessons. if he wants to learn he can simply read the books and ask his friends for help.
he can't get grades and it is O.W.L. year, so he don't need grades.
also if the ministry is searching for him....hey they can trace him using magic (casting the patronus charm was OUTSIDE his home, so they have ways to trace the magic).
and how could he take his O.W.L. without them knowing? the people testing him are from the ministry.

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NO WAY SO STUPID!!

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Your story is absolutly brilliant - finally someone came up with a more satisfying ending for OotP! Though, I would have liked Harry and Sirius to say goodbye before Harry is brought to Azkaban! Anyway, my compliments, and I will be keeping my eyes open for book 6.

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this is a wonderful story but you dont have any of the charackters personality

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The plot line was wonderful, a great twist on J.K. Rowlings book 5... I might suggest, however, that you get a beta reader. A lot of you grammer is confusing; frequently odd sentence structure, repetition within a single sentence, misspellings, etc. I do, however, think you have a lot of natural talent, your skills just need honed a bit. xJL

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I love your story! going along book 6 now! will review soon! check my story if u hav time =P

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WoW! I loved it! A very good differnt version of the 5th book. I sure hope Harry gets out of there soon. Poor kid... anyway I'm giving this fanfic a 10 beacuse it was so full of ideas and plot lines that captured my attention. I saw mistakes in the frist chapter. Such as commas and mispelled words. I also get confuzed with the tense your doing. I always write in past tense ( I dont know why) and you kinda write in present tense so that's whats weird but there's nothing wrong with that. If your going to answer this review then i'll ask how I can become a memeber to this site. I went to read that letter ( the one with the polices) but I cant find that button or anything else that will let me become a memember. I have a few fic in Fanfictionet.com and I would like to post them here. Once again I will say that I LOVED this fanfic and I hope you update very soon. Dont worry if you dont get a review for a few monthers 'cause I will be on vaction in the caribban. Is Harry going to get a girlfriend? I hope it's Hermione. Any other girl is fine besides Ginny. I cant stand her going out with Harry (No offence if you like this pair) . She is Ron's little sister and all... Continue with 6th year!!! ~Twlight

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it's ok work on it, the grammer does'nt allow a smooth read and you switch tenses way too much

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That was great! i can't wait to see what happens next!

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This was great! As usual!

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Great story so far! If u have any time could u review my stories? Thanks!

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LOVED your story.. please update soon.. also please read mine if you have a chance! i was so pissed wiht the way ootp turned out.. your way is better

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Great story so far! Update SOON!

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Loved it . The parts with were GREAT Umbridge, Well off to read the next chapter! Ta Ta ! Tonks

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Great story hehe if only u finished it!! haha alwayz time to continue plz complete and if you do can you please contact undacava_soldier@hotmail.com witht he details if yah want?? Byeee and keep it going

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Love the story update soon please...i like a lot more then Rowlings (only becasue she had Sirius die....PLEASE DON'T HAVE SIRIUS DIE!) hehe great story!

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Hey great story! Please update soon and if u can please R&R my stories

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Nice story. I always wondered why Harry never used the mirror

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