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Review #1, by Maelody beginnings

6th March 2014:
Hey there! I saw that this story has three chapters and no reviews! I don't know why, because so far, it's absolutely adorable! Maybe just a little editing here and there, and it'd be perfectly adorable! :D

I love how Lee and him have never been in an argument, and how long they've been together! A lot of people would consider that unrealistic, but honestly, I have two friends that are exactly that way! If they have argued, they don't let anyone know. They always fix it, and the really seem in love! So I like the angle you took here! :)

It's cool that it's backwards on who marries who here. Lee's parents want her to marry a muggle, even though they know she isn't one. I wonder what home life is like for her? Do the accept her abilities? Especially since she seems to have a special, even more unique power compared to others? (Nice touch by the way!) :)

I will hopefully continue on to reading the rest of this soon! I hope you'll find time to come back to it some day, too! It's always great to finish off something you've started! :D


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