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Review #1, by AlexFan A Certain 'Je Ne Sais Quoi'

19th June 2013:
The sad part is that this is only my third review. NEVER FEAR, I WILL LEAVE ALL SIX REVIEWS . . . Er, eventually at least. Some time in July or something like that.

I absolutely loved this! It was so cute and funny and you're right, there are very few Bill and Fleur stories out there so it's nice to see that there's another one being added to the short list. I loved the little side notes that Bill kept adding throughout the story, it just made this a lot funnier and more enjoyable to read.

I've never read a story written in the way that you wrote this so your writing style was definitely new and a breath of fresh air. I love how this was written. I also love the fact that it was short. For the past couple of days I've been reading nothing but stories with long chapters and it's so nice to finally read something that is not five thousand words and counting long.

The only thing I have to point out is that you kept spelling Victoire's name wrong. Other than that I really enjoyed reading this!

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Review #2, by dobbys_socks A Certain 'Je Ne Sais Quoi'

7th May 2012:
Haha, this was awesome! Thanks for entering the challenge and I'm very sorry I haven't read this sooner.

Wow. This was hilarious. The way Bill kept yelling at his kids halfway through... and the last two lines made me crack up so much that my mother now thinks I'm a psychopath. Oh well; she raised me.

There wasn't any punctuation or grammatical errors that I noticed except that it might have been better with quotation marks and maybe a few less sets of brackets. Most other stories I read are full of mistakes, so I'm heaps glad to see this. I loved the storyline and how it was just him and his kids, and the Teddy references in there were cute too.

Fantabulous job and I will write a blog with the winners in it, so look out for it. I only have one other fic to read so it will probably be up tomorrow or something.

Thanks again!

Author's Response: Well, I take it that you liked it - and for that I am totally thrilled. What author wouldn't want someone cracking up at their story (Mothers are just like that sometimes - I can totally relate, because mine does that too...maybe it's a fandom thing?)

Yeah...I always look into beta-ing things later on, and I was kinda in a rush to get this one even completed. I'll definitely look into the brackets and quotation marks thing though - so thank's for the suggestion.

Thanks so much for the challenge - and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!

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