This is another great chapter, and I love how flawlessly you brought them all together! One thing though, wasn't Ravenclaw's father named Arnold or something like that? I didn't think that it was Martin... Report Review
I LOVE this story! I myself am in the process of writing a founders story, and I have to say, I think that yours is better than mine. I thought that it was a pity that there aren't many reviews, but I wanted to be the first to do so with this chapter. But I do have a question. How do you put up banners? I've been trying, but without success. Can you tell me how? Report Review
To add to my last review, Salazar was described by J.K. Rowling to be intelligent and shrewd. I find your chapter contradicts somewhat that description. However your story is great so far and I hope you will keep writing it.Author's Response: Thank you so much for writing a review! For some reason I had some issues writing Salazar but I will go back and find what JKR said and make some updates. I really appreciate the feedback. Thank you for pointing out the error and I will correct it post haste! Happy Reading! Report Review
Really good job so far, I like the story and how it has followed all the characters! Keep going!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I love getting any kind of feedback. Happy Reading! Report Review
Hello there, I must say it's a great story. I love how you showed the characters bending the elements. However, in this chapter I don't think the story decribes Salazar well because he was described to be intelligent and shrewd...Author's Response: Thank you so much for writing a review! For some reason I had some issues writing Salazar but I will go back and find what JKR said and make some updates. I really appreciate the feedback. Thank you fro pointing out the error and I will correct it post haste! Happy Reading! Report Review
Just wanted to give you a review for your story! I've nerv read anything like this before and I found it to be really well written.
I really enjoyed it and seeing what was going to happen. I thought you did a great job with your descriptions and imagery. I also liked your characterizations. I am excited to find out what happens next!
Keep up the great writing! =)
Recenseo 2012Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time to let me know how you felt. I'm terribly sorry for responding so late. I've been dealing with a lot of personal issues but I hope to get back to writting soon. I'm trying to submit my next chapter this afternoon. I hope you are enjoying yourself and are reading a lot of awesome stories :)
Thanks again Report Review
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