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Review #1, by Virgo Plans are Made

14th June 2013:
This is another great chapter, and I love how flawlessly you brought them all together! One thing though, wasn't Ravenclaw's father named Arnold or something like that? I didn't think that it was Martin...

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Review #2, by Virgo The Badger Abandons the Den

13th June 2013:
I LOVE this story! I myself am in the process of writing a founders story, and I have to say, I think that yours is better than mine. I thought that it was a pity that there aren't many reviews, but I wanted to be the first to do so with this chapter. But I do have a question. How do you put up banners? I've been trying, but without success. Can you tell me how?

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Review #3, by Sharon The Fox Strikes the Serpent

27th November 2012:
To add to my last review, Salazar was described by J.K. Rowling to be intelligent and shrewd. I find your chapter contradicts somewhat that description. However your story is great so far and I hope you will keep writing it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for writing a review! For some reason I had some issues writing Salazar but I will go back and find what JKR said and make some updates. I really appreciate the feedback. Thank you for pointing out the error and I will correct it post haste! Happy Reading!

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Review #4, by Carlee Point Me

27th November 2012:
Really good job so far, I like the story and how it has followed all the characters! Keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I love getting any kind of feedback. Happy Reading!

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Review #5, by Sharon The Fox Strikes the Serpent

26th November 2012:
Hello there, I must say it's a great story. I love how you showed the characters bending the elements. However, in this chapter I don't think the story decribes Salazar well because he was described to be intelligent and shrewd...

Author's Response: Thank you so much for writing a review! For some reason I had some issues writing Salazar but I will go back and find what JKR said and make some updates. I really appreciate the feedback. Thank you fro pointing out the error and I will correct it post haste! Happy Reading!

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Review #6, by ScorpiusRose17 The Eagle Takes Wing

31st May 2012:
Hi there!

Just wanted to give you a review for your story! I've nerv read anything like this before and I found it to be really well written.

I really enjoyed it and seeing what was going to happen. I thought you did a great job with your descriptions and imagery. I also liked your characterizations. I am excited to find out what happens next!

Keep up the great writing! =)

-SR17

Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time to let me know how you felt. I'm terribly sorry for responding so late. I've been dealing with a lot of personal issues but I hope to get back to writting soon. I'm trying to submit my next chapter this afternoon. I hope you are enjoying yourself and are reading a lot of awesome stories :)

Thanks again


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