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Review #1, by teh tarik A Very Unnecessary Chapter

9th July 2014:
Hey there!

Reviewing for the House Cup! I think this is a great first chapter, and I like how detailed your introduction of your characters are! It's lovely to read about students starting at Hogwarts time to time, really brings back the old magic of the early HP book days. I really enjoyed reading about the girls choosing and buying their wands at Ollivanders. They seem like a likable and very fun-loving bunch! And Weasleys Wizard Wheezes...I love it that Charlotte is buying love potion and a portable swamp! It's a strange combination; I think Charlotte has got plenty of mischief in mind. Probably about to start a pranking career at Hogwarts?

Great start! Hope you keep working on this. :)

House Cup 2014 Review
Educational Decree No. 6

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