I like how it describes the normalcy of her day in the beginning then goes to "It was about nine o'clock when the first strange thing happened." That's a great setup!
I can't imagine how creepy it must be to have a bunch of weirdly dressed people show up and tell you that you're a reincarnation of a mythical person. You describe her reactions very well! I would have probably reacted the same way :D
You ended it on an extremely frustrating note. Which is great for you! It just pulls me in and makes me want to know HOW and WHY she is the reincarnation.Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad that it had that effect on you, it was really what I was going for! Thank you so much for reviewing! :) (You're actually the first person I've ever had review XD) and yeah, she's rather easily freaked out, and has a near-complete breakdown in the next couple of chapters. Thank you for your comments! :D
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