Love it. I just couldn't stop smiling. You should continue this :)Author's Response: Thank-you so much for reviewing. :) Bringing a smile to someone's face makes me feel really great! :) Yes I want to continue it I am going to work on it when I have some time :D Report Review
Aw! This is so sweet! I feel like butter! I'm melting everywhere and I've got this warm feeling around me!
You wrote a really good story, and I love the two POV between the two characters! Especially their dialogues, they seem to not know what to do when they are with each other. Gah, so cute!
Recenseo 2012Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I am so happy to hear that I got you to feel like that. I am a hopeless romantic as my friends always say so it is good to know that others like that kind of thing.
Glad you liked the pov's i wasn't sure about it but it just sort of needed it to get an understanding. They don't haha that's what was so fun to write.
Thank-you again and Report Review
i enjoyed reading from the different p.o.v's, and i would like to see James pov after the kiss.Author's Response: Thank-you for your review. hm if I write a sequel to this I will consider adding that pov in. :) Report Review
I love the ending line! It's fantastic!
I also liked how you switched the POV between Lily and James. I think it added a lot. The sections could have been longer, though.
I like your take on how Lily and James get together :)Author's Response: Thank-you Miss Muggle.
Yes the last line was my favourite as well, i knew when i wrote it that i wanted that to be the last line.
I'm glad you liked the POV switches I wasn't sure people would like it, but I thought it worked best that way.
Thank-you for taking the time to write a review, I'm glad you liked the story. Report Review
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